Believe that Magic Works (10/10) - R/Hr - R

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Title: Believe that Magic Works (10/10)
Author: shocolate
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Words: 3500
Rating: R

Written for sugarandginger’s Definitive Ron/Hermione Year Seven Novella Challenge

As the Trio set off on their search for the Horcruxes, Ron finally accepts that he wants to look after his two best friends in completely different ways

Comments

[rahnee13]

Heh, found it here at LJ! I read it at TQP and said "how come I haven't seen it at LJ?" Well, it's because I'm a dork.

Can I tell you how much I love this story?

Well, no I can't. Words fail me.

I

LOVE

THIS

STORY!

You have the characters down to a "T" and I think this is the best Ron I've seen in fan fiction! I love the Harry and Ron interaction, and their "depravity" and how mature yet totally boy they are in this. I love your Hermione b/c she is so totally Hermione and believable!

And YOU are one of the few who make me believe in the Ron/Hermione pairing. If JKR wrote it like this, then I might just be OK if they get together in book 7.

I could gush on and on and on... but I'll zip it. Suffice to say, your story here put me in a very good mood!

[shocolate]

*blushes madly*

Yup, even when I write Ron/Hermione, the Harry+Ron stuff is the most important.

This is teh only fic I ever actually planned and chapterised and it is my baby and thank you!

[fichan]

Holy [insert many, many curse words here, which have been edited to save..hell, I don't even know, cause if people had problems reading curse words, they wouldn't be in this chapter..and..sdkflskdufosuf.]

It's 1 in the morning, and I'm..stuttering incoherently.

I don't even want to /read/ the seventh book now. It can't be any better than this. Ever. Holy shit.

I really mean it, too. This has been the wildest ride [*coughs* all pervy thoughts aside..]..ever.

I really didn't want this to end. But I suppose it had to.

I wish I could write things like this.

The whole Horcrux thing was genius - don't think anybody could've designed this better.

Wow. Just...

..wow.

[I'll stop my insane stammering now.]

[shocolate]

OMG, you've made my day/week/month/year!

This was my baby - I have never plotted anything out before, or written multi-chapters, and I tried so hard to recycle as much as possible from the other books, and, yes, I think I like my Horcrux theory - although I have to look at it out of the corner of my eye, or it collapses in a heap!

[fichan]

I did? xD Wow. n_n

*nods* I'm thinking about doing a Naruto fic with a plot..but I'm planning it out first. xDD

..*runs to read your other HP r/hr fics* -ninja-

[the10thdocsgirl]

Wow...I've spent the last few hours reading this fic and it's for sure the best seventh year fic ever! It's simply brilliant. Brilliant!

[justpretend523]

oh em gee...just amazing. the ron/harry relationship was so awesome, you did it perfectly. and just ron in general, this protectiveness and all of that...i think you captured the idea ive always had of him in my mind perfectly. i cant tell you how many times i got teary-eyed reading this.

and scar at the end!!! <3 so freakin awesome!

[381newmessages]

Let me just begin by saying that was wonderful! I usually intesely dislike Ron for the simple reason that in many R/Hr stories, and the books, he seems too stupid and immature for Hermione. Your fic, however, showed that his humour has purpose, that immaturity fades, and that stupidity can be left behind with childhood. Your Ron is the only one I've ever liked, and that's saying something because even though I haven't ever liked the pairing, I always give it a chance. But onto your telepathic link with JKR...seriously, its really freaky how many things are so similar...just wow. I won't go into that further in case you havent finished DH yet...
Yea, totally incoherent review...but I'm so surprised in liking Ron!
Great job again!

[shocolate]

*bursts into tears*

Firstly that you like my Ron - that means the world to me!

Secondly, that, well, yes I have finished teh book, and I only gave myself half a point for Harry going tinto the Ravenclaw Common Room, so, gosh, thank you!!!

[381newmessages]

Oh no! *hands you tissue