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ange_sinistre in shizunatsu

Holiday Contest Entry (and new member, yay?)

Dec 25, 2006 02:33

Hey! I just joined up, so... might as well make myself known with a fic entry. Er, still kind of new to LJ in general, so let's hope I do this cut thingamajig right. If not, feel free to delete and I'll try 'er again later.

Title: Foundation
Genre: Angst/Friendship-ness?
Characters: Shizuru and Natsuki
Rating: PG-13 (only because Kuga has a potty ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

rphjas December 25 2006, 11:56:25 UTC

What a beautiful story...and I hope you will write even more about these two similar..yet different souls..

the_firefly December 25 2006, 17:17:40 UTC

This was quite lovely. It's not hard to imagine Shizuru's fangirls thinking that she is far grander and richer than she actually is - and that it would lead to the rest of the school naturally thinking it was true as well.

You really have a nice style of writing these two characters. And I'm especially glad to see pre-series fic for them, :)

beyondfake_0 December 26 2006, 21:12:02 UTC

I second this commenter!

kitsuneownyou December 26 2006, 21:16:14 UTC

Two thumbs up!

That was verr nize, a superb way to enter the community. =D

Welcome!

ange_sinistre December 27 2006, 05:53:46 UTC

Thanks, everyone! I kind of threw it together when I was sleep deprived and feeling a bit bummed out in the early hours of the morning. A bit sad that I didn't catch some errors, but for as late as I wrote it, I guess I should be pleased it turned out as it did.

Ah... yeah, I wouldn't imagine that Natsuki would have been big on Christmas before meeting Shizuru. And with the backstory I have for Shizuru in my head that I always draw from, neither would she. So.... yeah. ;)