homeless - chapter six (b)

[shizukanai]

title homeless
pairing yunho/jaejoong
rating nc-17
genre au,romance,fluff,drama
summary When Jaejoong allowed for a homeless man to stay in his house for one night,he would've never expected for the said man to return a few days later wearing an Armani suit and having two bodyguards flanking him.

Comments

[keeaneegan]

finally in peace :)

[shizukanai]

Yesss~ But some minor drama is still to come

[chloe1910]

So glad that the truth is revealed and everything is over. Go riddance to the three bitches.

[kattan69]

Yes, good riddance to those hags!...hopefully, this will be the last time we see them...hopefully.

[shizukanai]

oops, they'll have an appearance in the next chapter >.<

[shizukanai]

Haha I actually planned a tad bit of drama for the next chapter. Nothing too exciting but yeah xD

[tapzz]

ahhh finally!!!...minnie made an appearance...
ohh and three cheers for kim jaejoong..u go boy...i wish i could punch that insung...i am glad that jae stood for himself...yassss
i seriously hope yoosu will get together...
btw is this the end?
i dont want it to end ; ;
ty for the update..:)

[shizukanai]

Yeah it seemed that many readers were missing our Minmin so I brought him back ahha xD Yeah Insung is punchable in this story but JJ did a good job defending himself even without violence ^^

It's not the end yet ^^

Love this!

[theladysilver]

Can I just say how good you are? You've just exceeded my expectations with these two chapters (6a and 6b). The pace of Jaejoong's progress was just right! I love how he stood up for himself when Insung had the gall to lie about Jaejoong in front of Yunho, Yoochun, and the rest of Yoochun's friends. I was even more appalled how Insung had the guts to repeat all the lies he spread about Jae with Junsu present. But finally, Jae stood up for himself! I love how classy he was. He handled it quite well. He was calm and collected. His words were still true to his character. It was harsh, but what made it harsh was because he was telling the truth upfront. He didn't bother trying to downplay the reality of Insung's character

RE: Love this!

[shizukanai]

Here you go again, having me smile at your comment even before I get to read it haha xD

I'm so glad that you liked how JJ handles things. I think it would've been too much if I would've let JJ go all badass and bitchy on Insung, because that's not the JJ we all know from this story and I'm glad you agree that his way of defending himself against Insung's words in this chapter was true to his character.

Tbh I wanted to solve the Daniel issue at the beginning of the next chapter because I was having problems writing down the scenario at first but then chapter six seemed so incomplete to me and I decided to extend it for the sake of being done with the issue.

You don't know how much I'm grinning right now because of your compliments, goodness. I'd love to comment on your comment more but I dunno what to say xD I'm a little at loss for words and I'm just really grateful for your kind words.

Ah about Daniel and who he'd most likely end up with. I did hint at it in this chapter but through a minor character hehe x)

Re: Love this!

[theladysilver]

Awww. Really? Thanks! That's quite a compliment to me. Haha. It's ok if you're at a loss for words. Haha. It's nice to know that my opinion brought a smile to your face. :D Also, you're very welcome! You deserved it. Again, I'm a firm believer give credit where credit is due.

Also, about Daniel. You did? Oh my! I must have missed it! I need to read this chapter again! I was so focused on Jaejoong's progress that I must have just passed that over! DX

RE: Re: Love this!

[theladysilver]

Oh my! I think I've found the hint! I must say, I like it!! :D

[shinchul303]

Greatly enjoyed how this little office politics scenario played out. Nicely plotted!

Looking forward to where you take this now that the crisis is over.

[shizukanai]

A tad bit of drama will come in the next chapter xD