Comments | shiyori: Perverse Reflections, fic, PG 1/4

inverted_raven in shiyori

Perverse Reflections, fic, PG 1/4

Jan 19, 2010 07:31

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach. I am not making money off of this fanfic. It is purely for entertainment purposes only. Tite Kubo gets full credit for Bleach and the characters within. I'm only molesting them for a little while.

Title: Perverse Reflections

Author: Inverted Raven

Characters: Hiyori, Shinji (mentioned)

Parts: 1/4 (they're really ( Read more... )

Comments 7

flyssa January 19 2010, 23:29:54 UTC

Aww, poor Hiyori :(

I like this so far! I hope you continue :3

inverted_raven January 20 2010, 10:29:39 UTC

I certainly will. :) Usually, I'm not too good with multi-parters, but these aren't exactly that. They're mostly companion pieces that go with each other, but they aren't exactly the same story and they are not really sequels. :p

I'm glad that you liked the fic. :) And, I agree, poor Hiyori. :( But, I think that everyone has had moments in their life when they have to sit and wonder why the guy they're so interested in just doesn't seem to reciprocate. Hiyori has a lot of pride, so she isn't willing to just throw caution to the wind if she thinks its hopeless and be thought of as an idiot or be on the receiving end of anyone's pity or sympathy.

masi_chin January 20 2010, 08:03:09 UTC

It's very interesting! I love how Hiyori reflected about her self and her love for Shinji. It made her feel inferior about her looks and chances to get noticed... which is sad.

Thanks for sharing! Looking forward for the next! :D

inverted_raven January 20 2010, 10:32:19 UTC

Yes, that is sad. :( But, a lot of girls go through that. Probably a lot of guys, too. All four fics will continue along this vein, which is why I decided to call it my Reflections series. :p Even though its only four.

I'm really glad that you liked it! I hope Shinji doesn't sound like a jerk, he's totally unsuspecting, really. He's just not around to defend himself, lol! :p But, he will have one Reflection piece all to himself. :)

masi_chin January 20 2010, 10:59:08 UTC

I'd love to see Shinji's reflection.^^ After the reflection series, are you going to write a fic regarding some progress or direction on their relationship?

inverted_raven January 20 2010, 11:00:29 UTC

I actually don't know, yet, what I'm going to do when I'm finished with Reflections. But, that's a good idea, and I will think about it. :)

anonymous December 29 2010, 04:46:34 UTC

This is a very good first chapter to a great series of FanFic's. Inverted_Raven if you read this let me tell you that you are great at your craft,and although you use a disclaimer that says generally you are not responsible for the portrail of the bleach characters,an that you you don't own blech. In away you have made it your own. Considering the vizoreds personlity is not shown in depth by the actual anime, you made Hiyori, an Shinji more 4 deminsional charecters,and that is what doesn't nesescerialy make you a unique Shiyori FanFic writer it shows your streangth as a writer. I pray to what ever great power controls the universe that some how your FanFics get incorparated in to the actual anime. I also in courage you to go farther and feel in some of the blanks on what happens to them after The battle at Fake,an Real Karakura town. To anyone else if none of that satisfies a descripsion of how good this is read it your self.