The Pros and Cons of Text Messaging

May 16, 2010 15:43

Title: The Pros and Cons of Text Messaging
Pairing: USUK (APH)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: England wakes up with a hangover and bad morning breath and has no idea why America is at his house or being so... considerate?

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drawing, hetalia, fic

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tsukino123 May 17 2010, 00:22:13 UTC
That was so sweet and adorable and just cute and filled with fluff! and I LOVED your pictures it made the story so much more original and wonderful :)

I also enjoyed how you wrote the relationship between the two from confused England to the just adorable romantic America. At least now England can say something good came out of his drinking ;)

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shiyasim May 17 2010, 04:01:22 UTC
I love fluff so much!! Haha and I just added the pictures cause I wanted France to have that one text message... and then the rest happened! And yes, England can finally say that something good came out of his drinking (but France probably has blackmail material for centuries after this lolol)! Thanks so much!

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dentelle_noir May 17 2010, 00:39:58 UTC
I have never ONCE read a Hetalia fic. Ever. But I have seen SOME Of the anime so I wasn't totally lost.

But the title had me so interested that I had to click it.

Then, The format. Message, story, Message, story, picture message...

I was hooked. I read it from beginning to end, then flicked back to skim the texts again to make sure I didn't miss anything.

I loved the format so MUCH that I'm DYING to shamelessly copy this format into some other fic (if a suitable fic idea ever comes...)

I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this fic, eventhough I'm not really a Hetalia fan! Thank you so much for sharing!

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shiyasim May 17 2010, 04:01:55 UTC
Omg feel free to use! Haha and I swear the formatting took longer than it did to write and sketch combined... LJ... so confusing wtf... *computer retarded*
Anyway, thanks so much! (Especially for bothering to read it when you're not a Hetalia fan lol)

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twistedsheets10 May 17 2010, 00:51:11 UTC
MY GOD THIS IS BRILLIANT.

And I want a boyfriend/lover/whatever like AMERICA, dammit.

I really, really love the scene where England wakes to America beside him for the second time, and the really sweet kiss. ♥

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shiyasim May 17 2010, 04:02:36 UTC
Thanks!!!! I want a boyfriend like America TOO... actually this whole plotless fic was just... I wanted to see America being a totally awesome bf. That is all. lol

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shiyasim May 17 2010, 04:03:09 UTC
Thanks so much!! Haha the pics were drawn super ultra fast as an afterthought but glad you liked them! :D

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re_fooshi May 17 2010, 01:37:44 UTC
That was so cute. WHY WAS THAT SO CUTE!?! Man, I absolutely adored that! The concept has been done time and time again, sure, but you did it very, very well. I loved the texts and the pictures and... ugh I can't even describe how much this made my day.

I loved it.

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shiyasim May 17 2010, 04:03:59 UTC
Haha yea it's been done so much by now!! But actually this whole story is entirely plotless cause all I wanted was to see America being a great bf (and it was also supposed to be a lot shorter of a fic....wtf, no plot and I wasn't even going to post it anywhere) but then it grew... and I was like oh, well, why not add pictures and more texting? Anyways, thanks so much!! Haha I am glad that my own amusement has brought amusement to others!! XD

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