"A Choice of a Lifetime" - chapter 1/6

[shivver13]

This is the one I'm the least proud of. It's very rough (mostly unedited), drags on in some parts, and is sometimes very heavy-handed. (Yes, here I am giving reasons not to read this!) However, it's very important to the storyline in this AU, since it sets up all of the rest of the stories. I can see how to fix this thing - what to remove, what to

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[a_phoenixdragon]

Holy!!! Moly...and I do not mean that as a pun. What the ever-lovin'?! OMG, this is NOT good! (The situation, not the fiction. The fiction gives me EXCITE and I MUST have more!)

Very much looking forward to the next part!!

*Bites nails and waits*

[shivver13]

Oh, I really hope it lives up to your expectations! I'm not confident it will, but it's nice to hear that it opened well! :)