Comments | shitaki_shrooms: opaque [one]

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opaque [one]

Nov 27, 2011 15:12

jaejoong/changmin.
r.
343 words.

( entire story takes place in a mental asylum. read at your own risk. )

dark, r, series, jaemin, au, romance, dbsk

Comments 12

countrymir November 28 2011, 01:52:52 UTC

its a really vague beginning but i can see that there is tons of potential with the creepiness in here. changmin is creepy in himself but we don't know much about jaejoong either. because of that, we can't write him off as harmless either. I MEAN HE'S IN AN ASYLUM FOR FRICK'S SAKE.

can't wait to see where you're going to take this :3

i_am_rolling November 29 2011, 03:21:54 UTC

thank you!

hollyhockyuu November 28 2011, 02:34:42 UTC

Ok I buy it, I'm looking forward to see more of this one sounds like a really interesting one.

i_am_rolling November 29 2011, 03:22:05 UTC

i hope it is :)

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i_am_rolling November 29 2011, 03:22:16 UTC

i guess you'll just have to see :)

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i_am_rolling November 29 2011, 03:23:16 UTC

i will definitely write more of this. it is quite...interesting, haha

thank you for reading :)

dragonmelodies November 28 2011, 03:42:46 UTC

ooo this sounds really interesting, i've never really read or seen anything about asylums so im really interested. can't wait for more ^.^

i_am_rolling November 29 2011, 03:24:14 UTC

well i don't know much about them either so don't rely so much on this story haha, but thank you!