Repackaging and pitching ideas to myself.

[shirozora]

So I'm plotting the sequel to Pilots, and boy is it fun. The last thing I want to do is pull a Spiderman 3 and write in too many villains/story arcs, therefore muddling the story and diluting it. I brainstormed a ton of ideas, including plot points and subplots, but every time I throw them at the dartboard they all either stick or don't. All I have

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[echo_grace_07]

I'm slowly working through gedry's BB atm, but I'd be happy to help in a general sense. What kind of beta are you looking for?

[shirozora]

Someone who can catch (grammatical) errors and tell me if the story flows. If you think you can do it feel free to PM me your email, :)