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shirosaki173

Cracky fic... again

Dec 15, 2010 23:47

Title: How to Bake Brownies and be an Espionage Agent
Author: The one and only me.
Rating: PG-13 for a few swear words
Characters: Reborn, Luce, Yamamoto, Tsuna, Gokudera, Chrome, Ryohei, Hibari
Warnings: Tsuna flailing all over the place. Ryohei's extreme extremeness. Yamamoto.. being Yamamoto.
Summary: Ryohei babysits. Tsuna and co. turn into ( Read more... )

reborn, sasagawa ryohei, khr, yamamoto takeshi, hibari kyouya, gokudera hayato, sawada tsunayoshi, chrome dokuro

Comments 5

ezcap1st December 15 2010, 16:43:27 UTC

OH GOD YOU MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD.
Btw, Gokudera's not the pineapple head - that's Mukuro. Or
Chrome. Goku's the octopus head.
Hahaha, yeah, they were all in character! But wtf, Reborn, a terrorist attack? That's... too extreme!
You're wonderful, keep the crack coming! ♥

shirosaki173 December 16 2010, 01:22:11 UTC

Haha,thanks! And all the while I was writing I was thinking... 'Hmmm, pineapple head doesn't sound right...' so thanks for pointing it out!
Glad to know my characters are IC. Positive reviews make my day ♥♥♥ Thanks!

michellehail December 15 2010, 18:00:47 UTC

o-oh my god i love this fic! ; _;
It's perfect in so many ways!

I think they're rather in character to me, haha and Ryohei's "EXTREME TALK" makes me crack up too! xDD
And Yamamoto... so oblivious it's cute hahaha

I loved this fic, and how you made it fit into their daily life kinda style!
Thumbs up! 8D (Y)

shirosaki173 December 16 2010, 01:24:37 UTC

Ah, thanks!I loved the earlier parts of the manga, when all they did was run around and have fun- that was hilarious. So when I wrote my fic I tried to keep those happy chapters in mind :) So it's good to know my characters are in character, phew.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it :D

nivek01 December 16 2010, 20:53:47 UTC

Chrome is one of my favorite characters, so it's nice to see someone portray her as part of the group in a daily life antic. And she isn't just sitting in a corner staring creepily at people, so double thumbs up.

"Oh, it's okay Yamamoto-kun, the cars are all imaginary."

I laughed so hard at this line. Seems like something she'd say.

Though I think people tend to rely too much on the characters weirder tendencies, this is how they acted in the daily life arc, so that's okay. And Yamamoto seems like the kind of person who makes friends with everyone. A Yama/Chrome friendship isn't too hard to imagine.