[Fic] - The Hard Way - chapter 4

[shiroakuma]

Title: The Hard Way

Author: shiroakuma

Pairings: HayaRyu, RyuRen, YamatoRen

Genre: angst, romance

Rating: nc-17

Disclaimer: Do not own anyone or any of their lovely body parts…

Note: My first Fanfic and my grammar is not all that bright

Summary: With no Yankumi to bring them back together, Hayato and Ryu must go through the hard way to renew and refine

Comments

[akameangel]

Ah .. they messed with kudo's gang.. Oh mine

Ryu was quite cold to Hayato.
:( too bad, their relationship turned out to be like that.
The same goes for Ren and Yamato. :(

I want to know what happened next. Pls update soon. Thanks for sharing.

[shiroakuma]

I added Kudo's part afterwards so it doesnt actually say his name in the last part hehe
Ryu is trying to act cool, too cool for his own good tho =)
thnx for the comment and i will continue as soon as i figure my next step!

[dorayaki_chan]

No biggy just take your time :)) I think u re doing great

[shiroakuma]

Thanx for the encouraging hun! I will try my best =))

[erikaoi]

Just read this fic.hmm,ryu is kinda hard on hayato.poor hayato.

[shiroakuma]

=) yep Ryu is acting all distant but we know he cant last long with that act!
thnx for the comment!

[pinklovekt]

Ren cares about Ryu's feelings.. That's good!
And HA! Ren is the one that make Hayato faint. Lol.
Hmm.. Wonder when i'll get HayaRyu moment? *pokes* XDD!
Ryu should treat Hayato better. Poor Hayato x|

[shiroakuma]

I wanted a Ren at last punching Hayato scene =DD revenge from the 1st chapter!
Ren and Ryu are kind to each other 'cause they understand, also its gonna be hard to leave each other tho ^^
I tried adding a small moment but might have failed. Sorry '^-^
Thanx for commenting!

[granity20]

interesting!!!!yamato is hayato's cousin???O_O

[shiroakuma]

yeah, wanted add an extra there since yamato was like hayato a bit in the drama =))) plus it makes it different, right?
Thnx for the comment!

[granity20]

right!a very good difference!!!