Comments | shipwar: PR0N TIEM!!!!

hottchix4eva in shipwar

PR0N TIEM!!!!

Jun 23, 2007 00:54

i rote this cause molly and essie and fagboy's fics were soooo gross!!!

( priscilla totally belongs with SERRA!!!! )

how about this?, boys suck, yayz, what do you want little girl, im rite ur rong, listen up u hores, lol, boobies rule, blinky things, i want a red rider bb gun, shouldn't i be doing schoolwork?, boys are stupid, fire emblem, plea for shinies, gay, where is your god now, are you going to shut up?, assitude, attention whore, are we there yet?, are you stupid?, teh gehi made me do it, can't keep it in the pants, boys are smelly, lesbians, barn yard fun, het is ewww, bewbs, spelln iz 4 lozers, spllinz 4 nerdz, craptastic, boobies, teh ghei, pimp shizit, i return like firy thing from the ashes, yaoi is teh evol, teh gay, well who pissed in your cheerios?, what huh? i don't speak stupid

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maincharassuck June 23 2007, 05:12:48 UTC

I don't like that couple. Priscilla and Erk are so similar they were made for each other, but that's a whole other rant best saved for another time.

Your story is disgusting. A flimsy setup for poorly written sex, atrocious spelling and grammar, a pairing that needs at least 3000 words of build-up to be plausible. But what disturbs me the most is that you utterly disregarded the social and psychological reprucussions of a clandestine relationship such as theirs. Priscilla is a noble, therefore required to produce an heir, so there's no way she would be allowed to simply have a romantic or sexual relationship with another girl. Societies looked down on same-sex couples back then, it's important to show the homophobia and other adversities they would face.

hottchix4eva June 23 2007, 05:13:37 UTC

stfu prude i wrote it cause its hot ppl who rite about social angst crap are all boring fags ur just bein a hater

threesomesftw June 23 2007, 05:50:24 UTC

Yeah, and then it'd be all heavy-handed and preachy and whiny and it'd suck in a whole new way.

insanepurin June 23 2007, 05:16:16 UTC

You know, I read this as Rod having sex with Rod, so really, this was more like masturbation yaoi.

hottchix4eva June 23 2007, 05:17:38 UTC

DUN EVER SUGGEST THAT AGAIN OR I EAT UR BRANES!!! *puke*

princessawesome June 23 2007, 05:17:07 UTC

This is a prime example of why fucking idiotic males should not be allowed to write yuri ever. What a pile of shit, I should go over to your house and smash your fucking keyboard so you can't sully the internet with your worthless shit excuses for porn ever again, you stupid fucktard.

hottchix4eva June 23 2007, 05:25:21 UTC

STFU MISSY AND GO BACK TO DOING IT WITH ESSIE UR JUST STUPID AND JEALOUS CAUSE UR UGLY AND EVERYONE HATES UR FICS UR NOT TEH LESBIAN POLICE SO STFU

flamecrusader June 23 2007, 05:32:51 UTC

What the FUCK was that?!

hottchix4eva June 23 2007, 05:42:12 UTC

HOT SEX LOL

flamecrusader June 23 2007, 06:21:09 UTC

Coulda fooled me. It looks more like you fapping off with one hand while typing with the other. My goldfish could write a better sex scene than this.

icegoddessqueen June 23 2007, 05:51:36 UTC

*reaches for asprin and a cold towel* You trashed my beautiful story and stole my premise all so you can masturbate?! *weeps*

dramaislove June 23 2007, 16:21:03 UTC

Your premise?! *GLARE*

icegoddessqueen June 23 2007, 16:25:17 UTC

Are you still huffy over the fact that our stories happened to be similar? I know you're jealous that mine was superior to yours, but it's not healthy to hold grudges so long.

dramaislove June 23 2007, 16:27:08 UTC

*clenches fists, stamps feet* Everyone hated your story, it was insipid and awful! And you did steal my idea!

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