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ilovebishies in shipwar

my first lemon

Apr 28, 2007 21:47

ive just written a new story its got shigi from fushigi yuugi genbu kaiden this time and its also my very first lemon so please be kind

( i heard youre supposed to cut lemons so thats what ill do )

fushigi yuugi, how about this?, i love a fictional character, i hate myself, what do you want little girl, clowns are scary, boys do everything better, haters, im rite ur rong, listen up u hores, blah blah blah, but why? but but but?, batshittery, candy!, controversy, dude, i h8 u all, i want a red rider bb gun, shouldn't i be doing schoolwork?, i need nappy time, i'm on my meds i promise, plea for shinies, where is your god now, are you going to shut up?, u all r h0rz, cry because of you, attention whore, are we there yet?, are you stupid?, death of love, cry me a river, teh gehi made me do it, can't keep it in the pants, candy!!!, barn yard fun, big poopy heads, crying at night, logic has no place here, the path to salvation, sit on my lap little boy, spelln iz 4 lozers, i hate my vagina, air head, but why is the rum gone, ur going 2 hell 4 dat, craptastic, spllinz 4 nerdz, i hate all, but stop it, cutting my wrists, goodbye cruel world, crying in my pillow, i return like firy thing from the ashes, true love, well who pissed in your cheerios?, yaoi is teh evol, what huh? i don't speak stupid, whine bitch moan, can't take this crap, but what are your thoughts on yaoi?

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dramaislove April 28 2007, 21:14:52 UTC

...oh, God. This reminds me of my earliest stories. *cringes in pain at the bad memories* Still, at least I had the decency to use punctuation and capital letters. This is just drivel. (I'm sorry, I hate flaming people's fics because I know all too well what that's like, but this is just awful.)

sorakh28 April 28 2007, 21:15:43 UTC

*LAUGHS*

You call this smut? I don't call this smut! *laughs even more* Man, you need to work a whole lot more, girl! *keeps on laughing*

...I can't believe this is a serious piece, too! *snort giggle*

shadrogue April 28 2007, 21:16:38 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111111

mayxdecemberotp April 28 2007, 21:17:16 UTC

...I'm with Molly. Besides, isn't Shigi kinda...um, I better not say, cause spoilers and all. But really, this hurts my brain. And was the slam at Takiko really neccessary?

ilovebishies April 28 2007, 21:45:30 UTC

no no no shigi wasnt castrated or whatever all those girls on the forums are such liars its horrible and traumatising just like when the original manga lied about nakago chan getting killed and stuff waaaaaaaaaaah

and of course i had to slam takiko shes so nasty and whiny just like stupid yui and please get that icon away from me nakago chans mine

mayxdecemberotp April 28 2007, 21:46:44 UTC

No, you're just in denial.

ilovebishies April 28 2007, 21:51:04 UTC

argh i said not to keep using that icon its really offending me

shigi isnt a eunuch hotohori didnt die suboshi didnt die nakago didnt die or get raped none of its true at all i cant stand it anymore waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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sailor_bimbo April 28 2007, 21:17:45 UTC

Ugh, het. Self insert het. I need to go find some good yaoi and yuri now.