[One Piece: Zoro/Sanji] Prompt: Unclothed

Jan 02, 2011 14:36

Title: The First Time
Fandom: One Piece
Characters: Zoro x Sanji
Prompt: 43-Unclothed 
Word Count: 469
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/Spoilers: Thriller Bark
Summary: This isn’t how Sanji wanted it to be.

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devlinnreiko January 2 2011, 21:13:43 UTC
Ugh. You always manage to put so much into few words. It felt like a entire story <3

Lovely job. I really, really enjoyed it. ^_^

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fuxefuxe January 3 2011, 00:27:53 UTC
The only thing that I can say right now: I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!!

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stillarium January 3 2011, 02:59:29 UTC
Ohh, I love this. Just everything, the whole mood and little tidbits like Zoro asking him to wait (I can imagine that) or the mention of Mihawk's scar and how there's no privacy etc... I like the idea of inexperienced Zoro and not much going on during their adventures because they hardly find the time/privacy xD

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pillowmagic January 3 2011, 04:16:43 UTC
Oh, Cue. How do you come up with this stuff?

Nicely done.

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valoriejueles January 3 2011, 05:05:06 UTC
THIS.

WAS.

BEAUTIFUL.

(sequel where they get to do this the happy way? *Is sucker for slow starting relationships and kinda wants them to just have a get-used-to-each-other-naked session where Sanji is all WANT and Zoro is all NERVOUS and they are all HEARTWARMING*)

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fuxefuxe January 3 2011, 12:13:20 UTC
I concur. I will ADORE it.

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cuethe_pulse January 3 2011, 23:45:56 UTC
Ohoho, a sequel, eh? We shall see~

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meunda January 7 2011, 21:15:52 UTC
oh, seriously thirding this request. as well as the comment earlier about such short fics feeling like entire stories in there. *so jealous*

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