Hikaru no Go - Two Threads

[shiorikazen]

Title: Two Threads
Fandom: Hikaru no Go
Character: Isumi
Wordcount/Rating: 539 words / G
Summary: As the last two games of the pro exam commence, Isumi waits.
Notes: Thanks to aiwritingfic and spicyasparagus for the beta. Reviews or concrit are appreciated. Written for chain_of_fics. Also my first HnG fic.

Comments

[aiwritingfic]

*confettis* Welcome to the fandom. ^_^

[shiorikazen]

*grins* *dips toes into HnG waters*

[tekalynn]

Oh, wow, this is gorgeous. Understated with such a sting!

[shiorikazen]

O_O Thank you! *hearts* *is happy*

[ungalad]

Waaah. Poor Isumi, he needs a hug. I think you portrayed his feelings with much accurateness. ^___^ Lovely piece, thanks a lot for sharing it with us. <3

[shiorikazen]

Thanks. Was nervous how it would turn out, this being my first HnG fic and all.

and your icon is so cute

[ungalad]

Heh, I know how that feels. I think it turned out pretty good, and I hope you write more HikaGo fics. :) I'll be glad to read them!

Thanks! ^^

[shiorikazen]

Currently editing another ficlet that I scribbled down after getting inspired by aiwritingfic's sign-up post at drabble_trade. *laughs* I get inspired by the weirdest things, I swear.

your userinfo says you took the pic yourself.. you play Go?

[jay_ay90]

Yay, I understand what's going on now that I've read that part! XD

I like the way you wrote this fic in present tense as it gives a sort of suspense or urgency to Isumi's situation. And I pity him lar, the poor guy. *pats*

[shiorikazen]

Read that part? What part? *confused*

LOL My tenses made spicy and aiwritingfic go nuts, because the blur me didn't realise the given first line was in past tense and happily went writing in present tense. *cackles* But I changed the tense of the first line, so it's ok.

*pats him too* It's easy to relate to him since he's not a genius or stuff like that.

[jay_ay90]

I mean that I've read that part in the manga already. Just yesterday, since I got the manga from spicyasparagus recently.

I have problems with tenses too, I understand. XD

[spicyasparagus]

Much, much better. I like how it turned out. =]

...ah, Isumi. Understated guy who steals the attention of almost 80% of the females who read Hikaru no Go. Love him to bits. X3

[shiorikazen]

Sankyuu.

It's always the quiet ones. >< Or you know, the unsuspicious ones. *cough* Klose *cough*

[jay_ay90]

He stole my attention too! XD (In the later chapters, of course. I can't believe the transformation! He looked so dumpy and plain in the first few chaps he appeared)

[shiorikazen]

He stole my attention when he went to China. >___< During the insei chaps, I was more taken with Waya. And I still am. But that sneaky Isumi...