TVXQ | More Than the Air I Breathe | Changmin/Jaejoong | Oneshot

Apr 22, 2012 18:11

→ Warnings: (mild) Angst. Romance. Porn.
→ Photographer/Model AU; In which Changmin is the wide-eyed rising star behind the camera and Jaejoong is the cynical model in front of it.


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status: oneshot, fandom: tvxq, !writing, pairing: changmin/jaejoong

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SPOT waterpulse April 22 2012, 23:17:15 UTC
for Melody & Nana (if she wants one) :)

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Re: SPOT kratynoi April 23 2012, 00:15:36 UTC
OMG JJ~!!!!!! *tackles*

I am beyond speechless~!!! I'm a mess right now. That was everything I could have hoped for and more~!!! And I just don't know how to express all the love I have for this. It's quite possibly bigger than a ginger bread man's vitality~ Oh how I love that you brought Yoochun into the mix.

So many perfect lines and quips and their characterizations are perfect~~ I've always told you I love your characterizations. Well I do, if I don't say it enough. Oh Changmin~ you adorable adorable man~~ (he's change/progression kinda mirrors RL Changmin...at least how I view him and the changes he's gone through. He was so much cuter, has such an innocence still left about him. Now...but I digress XD)

And the ending~~ omg~ I was about to cry. "I can’t remember her name, but I know I loved her." It was perfect~ so so so perfect. And the subtle love confession but not. It was nicely done. All of it was beyond amazingly written. You spun an amazing story around my little AU prompt. And the SMUT~ *fans self ( ... )

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Re: SPOT waterpulse April 23 2012, 00:49:49 UTC
LOL I KNOW THAT CHANGBIM ICON ANYWHEREE!! XDXD

I actually had bb!Changmin (like the one who spoke in high-tones and pretended to be dumb because he was the magnae but was like smarter than all his hyungs and knew it) in mind when I wrote this. Like the Changmin from Dangerous love or like this Changmin:

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Re: SPOT kratynoi April 23 2012, 01:03:22 UTC
Hahaha~ XDDD What can I say~ elephants, music, and a laptop? Kinda my loves in life. Now it if just had a camera around his neck, then we'd be in business!

:3 Oh yesss~ I agree with that assessment. Magnae!Changmin was adorable and you knew he was probably holding his tongue the whole time that era on the cameras while letting it rip when they were at home. XDD (The many takes for that one shot of Jae covering Min's mouth....I think they messed up on purpose.XDDDD)

It was all perfect~ And I liked that you didn't try to throw all the members in. Nothing against HoSu~ not at all~ but it does get cliched when you're trying to figure out, okay, how's the author going to try and work in all the members for a cameo now. Sometimes it works, and sometimes it doesn't, especially when it feels forced.

I bow down to your creative prowess~

THROW ME SOME MORE WHEN YOU HAVE THE TIME MMKAY? *snuggles* You do realize you're going to let lose a beast here, don't you? Oh the prompts are endless~~ XD But if you're offering I am SOOO going to ( ... )

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shinchul303 April 23 2012, 00:03:09 UTC
This is superb! Wish this could be a twoshot, with Changmin joining Jae in front of the camera.

Your epilogue about photographs is so true.

I used to do what I naively thought of as portrait photography. It was a major shock when one day I suddenly realized all I was really doing was showing more and more of my inner self to my viewers.

I'm in product photography now. It's safer.

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waterpulse April 23 2012, 01:00:21 UTC
Thank you!! Haha I wouldn't be sure of the direction if the story continued so I just ended it here. Besides, idk about modelling but if there's an art to photography, then surely there must be an art to modelling too. XD

I actually didn't know product photography was a thing. Most of Changmin's feelings I based on my own (when you write, you reveal more about yourself than your characters) and I asked around the photo-editors on Tumblr and most of them felt the same way. And idk there's usually a pattern of hitting-it-big and then becoming disillusioned by the industry?

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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waterpulse April 23 2012, 01:04:07 UTC
Three for three, yes! *fist pump* Hehe thank you for reading! :)

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waterpulse April 23 2012, 01:03:30 UTC
Ya because of you. ✧・゚:*\(◕ヮ◕\)

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waterpulse April 23 2012, 02:26:05 UTC
You made me put lube in. You win. ✧・゚:*\(◕ヮ◕\)

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burningleaf April 23 2012, 01:31:59 UTC
the idea probably explains why i look at yoochun's picture-tweets and feel sad yet happy and doubtful and hopeful all at the same time :|

this is really awesome~ top model!jae and photographer!min is so cute. min esp lol, because i understand how it is for him, to find out as time passes that life is not bright splashes of colors all the time; at the end it's grey with occasional dots of colours. this is off-topic, but speaking about colours are reminding me of the orange blossoms that frames my vision whenever i use this one road to go school. i think i'll take a picture of it this wednesday ;)

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waterpulse April 23 2012, 04:59:00 UTC
All part of the process of growing up, I guess. Yoochun actually picture-tweets scenery and not just himself (lol Jae you camwhore Istillloveyoutho) so if his photos make you feel something, kudos to him. ^^

Glad you liked, thanks for reading~ :)

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