A science fiction story I wrote for a class...

[shinydinosaur]

I wrote this short futuristic sci-fi story for a paper for my American English class last November and was cleaning out my computer and found it... I thought it was pretty good, although I don't remember exactly why we had to write it, and I think I got like a B on it for kind of missing the point of the paper or something? Anyways, I wanted to

Comments

[ever_neutral]

It's not bad at all! *g*

[shinydinosaur]

Thanks!

[lias9]

I quite like it, even if you did miss the point of the paper! In fact; it was very engrossing, and I especially found the end haunting. Nice job!

[shinydinosaur]

Thanks, I really love how my story ended and I didn't want to change it because it wouldn't fit how I intended.

Thank you! :3