Comments | shinyandnew: Fic: Dear Goodbye | popslash | justin/nick, justin/chris

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Fic: Dear Goodbye | popslash | justin/nick, justin/chris | adult

Dec 16, 2008 11:48

Title: Dear Goodbye
Author: phaballa
Pairings: Justin/Nick, Justin/Chris
Rating: Adult
Notes: Written for bittybang! This is an extension of Semper Fidelis which I wrote for the June Bug challenge ten million years ago. Or in June, whatevs.

Summary: Kirkpatrick smells the same as he always did, but cleaner, and with the hot breeze against his skin and the pot ( Read more... )

author:phaballa, xover:chris/nick, nsync:chris/justin, genre:au

Comments 6

llamabitchyo December 16 2008, 19:38:29 UTC

I think maybe the summary scares people away? Because it is such an awesome fic and not as much about war as the summary suggests?

phaballa December 16 2008, 19:45:34 UTC

*ponders* I am SO BAD at summaries. I need a better summary!

llamabitchyo December 16 2008, 22:13:30 UTC

Hey, I like the new one. :)

phaballa December 16 2008, 22:15:15 UTC

YAY. It's better, anyway :P

bubbleforest December 16 2008, 21:09:12 UTC

This is on my reading list for my Christmas break! I know you've been wanting more feedback, but oh my god, sesa, it is killing me. I'm still going to feedback every bittybang story like I said I would, it's just ... taking more time than I expected to. /o\

phaballa December 16 2008, 21:19:54 UTC

I managed to get pretty much the best assignment ever for SeSa, so uh... I wrote 20,000 words in about a week and now I'm just editing. So I don't blame you! I am much more worried that people won't read it because they think it's about war, or they don't like the pairings, or whatever...