My first LJ post, please be gentle

[kygrlslovekevin]

His Eyes

The image of those eyes is so ingrained in my memory that I see them in every dream, in every waking moment.  I see them so often I feel it is fair to say that I have become obsessed.  Giving up alcohol and cocaine was simple compared to this.  Where will I ever find a rehab facility to cure my addiction to tall, dark, Kentuckians?

Comments

[pensnest]

Hi, and welcome! It's always a pleasure to meet someone new who produces popslash.

This is a beautiful little piece, and I have every sympathy with AJ - Kevin has *stunning* eyes. That second paragraph I like particularly. It’s when the lights go out and the silence reigns that I falter. is lovely.

Usually, we don't post the actual story to this community, just a link to our own LJ. As you're new to LJ, you may not know how to do that, so I'll explain - do excuse me if you know this stuff! Using < brackets instead of [, you do:

[a href="link to your page goes here"]Story Name[/a]

[kygrlslovekevin]

thank you so much! i promise to try to do better next time. :-) thank you for the kind comments and for taking the time to help me learn

[kaostic]

Whoa... nice microfiction. ^_^ And it's AJ/Kev! I love the way your AJ thinks.

And trust me, you don’t know what fucking is until you’ve been bent over a bathroom sink watching the shadows and heat of pleasure cross green eyes in the mirror.

That is DAMN hot for a sentence. And I have to agree with pensnest on the line she have pointed out. That is gorgeous.

Keep on writing! ^_^v

[kygrlslovekevin]

microfiction, huh? i'm so not up on the correct terms so thank you for the lesson. thank you also for reading and for the nice comments. and, i'm particularly fond of that line myself.