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lemniskate January 29 2004, 06:55:07 UTC
this was so, so, *so* good. somehow, I can just see every moment of it, and that's just amazing, you didn't get bogged down in long descriptions, but it's so vivid. Lance's internal thoughts, and his clear affection for each of the guys--just the little things, leaning into JC when they're tied up, Chris drawing his attention away from Joey at the party. and of *course* the wonderful resolution, which is so happy and so plausibly written and ahh. Just a wonderful way to start the day. I read this, then had to take my son to school, and all the way home I'm going, ooh! first thing I'm going to do is read lilysaid's jola AGAIN! and I did :)

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Re: lilysaid January 29 2004, 07:14:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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taylor_serenil January 29 2004, 15:57:45 UTC
Justin and Chris conspiring with Ashton Kutcher and a hot ending. Quality JoLa--mmm.

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pensnest May 4 2008, 11:59:03 UTC
Hi - I'm tagging entries for shinyandnew, and the link here is broken. Is the fic available online?

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lilysaid May 4 2008, 12:34:46 UTC
sorry about that! I fixed the link on this post and on my website.

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pensnest May 5 2008, 21:14:34 UTC
Shiny - thank you!

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