First Walk

[shino6]

A short story, inspired by a dream

Comments

[eugmoon]

here was the kindred spirit I'd searched for FOR many years

Or, perhaps,

here was the kindred spirit for whom I'd searched for many years

Whatever. I'm not a writer. ;)

And if you decide to flesh the story out further, you might want to explain why she would be the subject of his first walk instead of someone else.