[Fanfic] Private Moments, DBSK, JaeHo

[shinme]

 Private Moments

Title: Private Moments
Author: shinme
Length:  900  words
Rating: R (just to be safe)
Genre:  um...drabble-ish, romance?
Pairings: JaeHo
Warning:  un-betad, grammatical mistakes
Summary: The first time isn't really how he had imagined it to be.

A/N: I don't know where this came from, It just kinda wrote itself.

Private moments

It wasn’t

Comments

[xu_sheng_nai]

oh my gosh, i had no idea you could write anything like this xP
but i like it!! it's so much feeling and you describe it so well!
... i can imagine it... xD
poor yunho.. i think it's not so good seeing the father after that.. :P

thanks for sharing~!!! <33

[shinme]

lol, I'm full of surprises. XD
I'm glad you liked it! ^^
Thank you, dear. ♥

[vixoon]

sneaky du är, som postar utan att berätta för mig T_T
Aww, I really liked it <3 Once again, you're such a great writer, sis! I love how your stories always are so realistic and it's easy to picture it in your head. And Yunho.. Gah, I love him~ And I feel sorry for him but I'm glad he has Jae and I hope they'll be living happily ever after. Thank you for writing this ^^
ps. hurry up and write more~ :D

[shinme]

haha, well..det här kändes lite som en b-story som jag bara skrev lite snabbt för länge sen. Därför jag inte postat den nånstans.. vet inte riktigt vad jag tycker om den. :S But I'm glad you liked it. Thank you sweetie for your kind words. ♥ And yeah, you can't help but love Yunho. *hugs him hard* I'm sure Jae will take good care of him. :3
soo..yeah, I'll try writing something new, but we'll see~

[vixoon]

jag tyckte inte den var b-ig. synd att du aldrig postade den nånstans. You're welcome. Yay~ :D ♥
riiight. You're slow, you know that?

[shinme]

Hm, jag kanske postar den nånstans senare. Får se. And I know I'm slow B). ♥

[pekojan]

It made me...surprised, uhm...

I don't really like uke-Yunho. ^^ He is too manly to be underneath JaeJoong :">

Anyway, good job ^^

[shinme]

Ah, ok. I see both Jaejoong and Yunho as manly, but also dorky and sweet guys. I'm not really too fond of the uke/seme roles. I think if they were in a relationship, they would definitely switch positions during sex. ^^