[Story: "Haunted"]

[shining_valor]

 "Haunted"

'Orson sees the ghosts of those that he has betrayed.'

Disclaimer: Fire Emblem is owned by Nintendo and IS. No money is made by the writing of this drivel.

~o~

Comments

[mark_asphodel]

I like Orson's delusion that the dead are coming to him for aid.

That said, the direct reference to Innes was a little jarring, given that Seth and Eirika weren't named, nor were Forde and Kyle. It broke up the flow a bit.

[shining_valor]

Huh. You know, I hadn't really noticed, but it is a bit... jarring. Maybe something more on the lines of "The prince of Frelia..." would be better.

I'll have to edit.