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Forgive Me for Lying

Sep 21, 2010 22:30

Title: Forgive Me for Lying [Flash Fiction ( Read more... )

pairing: onew/key, fandom: shinee, !fanfic, genre: romance, rating: pg-13, genre: angst, author: bree_nd

Comments 43

boogie14 September 21 2010, 22:55:39 UTC

SPOT

boogie14 September 21 2010, 23:54:02 UTC

sabby unnieee why do you wirte angst! D:
it makes me saaad!! ;_____;
why is Kibummie'd dad so mean!
can't he be happy if his son is happy! D:
can't he see his bright smile whn he's with Jinki?

i hope they meet eachother after sometime
and then they can love eachother again!

LOVE YOU UNNIE♥

bree_nd September 23 2010, 14:40:56 UTC

Erm, I'm sorry? *bows*
I promise to write a happy ending like I always do! :)

Well, he just doesn't like Jinki for reasons you'll know in the next part.
He cares more about other thing than his son's feelings.

I'm working on it! No hints! XD

I love you too, Bellie! ♥

boogie14 September 24 2010, 14:58:04 UTC

waaah?!?! OuO
there's going to be more parts??!!
>u<)/ unnie is awesome!

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shan_ah_non September 21 2010, 23:10:01 UTC

;___________;
/waits for a happy ending

bree_nd September 23 2010, 13:22:11 UTC

Sorry for the late reply. Erm, and making you cry.

I'm working on the sequel right now and will post it up hopefully latest by this weekend. XD

Thanks for reading! :)

bree_nd September 26 2010, 06:06:26 UTC

It's done, dearie.

Here you go. Once Again

dubujoo September 23 2010, 03:08:21 UTC

Spot spot spot :D
Will be back as soon as weekend rolls in♥

bree_nd September 23 2010, 13:24:01 UTC

Sure. I hope to have posted up the sequel by then! XD

/waits for your epic comments. *grins*

bree_nd September 26 2010, 06:07:15 UTC

JooJoo darl~

I've done the ending. Enjoy! Once Again

dubujoo September 27 2010, 02:35:01 UTC

HUUUUUUUUUUUU SABBY BB♥ :DD
I'm finally here~

Oh my, the angst! This is making me sad :(
It must have been hard for Jinki to choose between his family or Kibum... why does that stupid father have to make Jinki leave Key?!? >:| Either way, he will be forced to be apart from his Bummie *pouts* This is heartbreaking ;___; And when he lied to him in the beginning~~ That he would tell him his address and e-mail and everything... *sniffles*

I need to run off to the sequel now! *O* I need to know what is going to happen to them~~ I hope there is a happy ending, cannot bear to see Onkey apart :)
Thanks for sharing unnie! Love you♥

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choon_hee September 26 2010, 06:22:57 UTC

Too..
Short! Make me so aaaw! Please tell me there will be a sequel, *like I haven't see the sequel fic lol

Where's my crying kibum!! *get bricked*
I have kibum Father from the bottom of my heart!
At least let me see kibum cry first lol.
I hope jinki will make a better company!
And beat that heartless father company and take kibum with him!

run to the next fic

bree_nd September 26 2010, 06:28:08 UTC

Hahahaha! Epic comment is epic! Thank you!

I can't not write crying Kibum. XD He's waiting for you in the sequel! :)
I'm not that mean, sweetie. XD

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bree_nd October 1 2010, 01:41:27 UTC

Thanks for reading bb~

And congrats on your win! XD