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rinni1905 July 6 2010, 01:10:24 UTC
Wah, I think short drabble really suits your style. You don't give us too much detail from what happened, but we can clearly understand the situation and how each character feeling in the fic.

And I think this one is one of the most interesting fic that I read from you. I don't know the reason why Jinki wanted to lie, but maybe he, himself, cannot determine his feeling for Kibum either, just like the way his mood was down in rainy days. :)

Kibum was so cute, he tried to cheer up the leader, even when he acted like he didn't care, he can't hide the feeling for Dubu. I'm suprise that the chicken didn't cheer Jinki's mood up. Maybe only Kibum can make him feel better.

Such a cute fic, and I like how Jjong asked Jinki, and Jinki lied. It's kind of sweet. :)

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lynlovesmin July 6 2010, 13:36:23 UTC
hahahah yeah. i can't write long stuff. i'm no good with plot. XD

mmm, first thing that came to mind when i thought of those lyrics was a sad story, but then i thought to myself that he doesn't have to be sad. he can deny his affection for key all he wants, but it doesn't mean that he's down about it.

lol. kibum > chicken 8D in my head, anyway. though chicken's a close second!

ONHYUN BFF-ERY. <3

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crossing_by July 6 2010, 08:26:34 UTC
minho as ninja this time ...
hehe

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lynlovesmin July 6 2010, 13:31:17 UTC
mmmm,
cos everyone loves a mysterious man.

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mistresalie July 6 2010, 16:18:40 UTC
to sum it up:
I LOVED IT : D
i loved the characters, loved the writing style, love everyone, love you : )
Jinki is funny-awesome like that and frankly, i wouldn't have it any other way even with the other boys.
I MEAN GUYS [shiz theyre older than me lol what am i thinking?]

i like Perry too : DDD
but comparing them is a bit hard....
but why do i get the feeling that i'll agree with you? @_@

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luv4yen July 7 2010, 04:53:34 UTC
Awww! That was adorable!
Only Kibum can make Jinki smile like that :D ! Even if Kibum did really NOTHING! Which is the adorable part because he totally blushed at Jinki's staring and smiling!
But poor Taemin who tried to do everything but only got nothing X] !
And I love Jongyu's bffery! Its amazing XD!

Thanks for sharing!

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