Apple and Cinnamon

Jul 16, 2009 19:24

Chapter: 50 Sentences
Category: PandoraHearts
Genre: Romance/Drama
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Gilbert/Oz(/Gilbert)
Comment: Written for the 1sentence challenge. Potential spoilers up to chapter 38 of the manga. Title inspired by the Utada Hikaru song of the same name (for some reason it inspired me, don't ask).
it started out so simple and innocent... )

challenge:1sentence, fandom:pandorahearts

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astrialite July 16 2009, 23:17:39 UTC
<33333333 every one of these. ;A;
Not to mention that they're all pretty much in character for Gilbert. So devoted to his master, isn't he~ <333333

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akalillyn July 17 2009, 22:30:11 UTC
I loved these. <3 But in 49, did you mean "if Gil hadn't been unable"? or "if Gil had been able" because it sort of didn't make sense?

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lonelyblkviolet July 17 2009, 22:36:29 UTC
I meant that if he was unable to do one thing, he was less likely to do the other thing. Hmm. I keep reading it, but the meaning stays clear to me?

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akalillyn July 17 2009, 22:44:43 UTC
OH. dude, I was just reading it wrong the entire time. I'm sorry. D: It was the "if" at the beginning that threw me off. But it makes sense. SORRY!

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lonelyblkviolet July 17 2009, 22:58:48 UTC
The intention was still lovely ♥ Thank you, m'dear.

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littlelinor July 17 2009, 23:57:01 UTC
Gods I simply adored those.
43 is a bit awkwardly written, but the rest is perfect IMO.

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lonelyblkviolet July 18 2009, 00:49:28 UTC
Thank you for commenting ♥

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kira_kiri July 18 2009, 00:22:28 UTC
I just. ogod ♥♥♥♥♥ love them alllll

You already know this, but I love #9 like whoa~ 8D

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lonelyblkviolet July 18 2009, 00:51:57 UTC
Oh #9 ♥♥

Thank you Muffieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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kira_kiri July 18 2009, 01:31:47 UTC
You're welcome :D ♥♥♥

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rokusasu13 July 18 2009, 04:25:35 UTC
A good read, haha, I mean, easier and simpler to read than a fic, these one sentences. Plus, it's Gil/Oz/Gil ♥ Loved every single one of them.

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