The Rain-Part Two

[shingo_sama]

Title- The Rain

Rating- R

Pairing- Roy/Ed

Warnings- Rape, Slavery

Summery-  He stood there, looking outside at the rain falling as the talking in the court surrounded him. He was guilty as charged. There was no 'saving' or 'breaking free' this time. He was just glad that his brother got away. That he didn't have to see or remember him anymore.

Comments

[hana_tsuki]

So sad *cries*

[shingo_sama]

wow you can read it? XD wow.. xD

[madrona_8]

I'd read it, but the font is sooo small

[shingo_sama]

I'm sorry, Lj did something now I don't know how to fix it

[madrona_8]

It seems okay now.

Roy is being quite awful. Though one thing you said in part one made me think he was doing it to push Ed into fighting back. Ed had no life left in him and he's trying to make him come alive. **shrugs**

[shingo_sama]

Very good! nn are you trying to figure me out? XD I still need to fix that formating...How do you use Html?

[cryogenia]

So far this story is interesting, though I'm having trouble figuring Roy's about-face...is this really Roy, and not Envy? I feel sorry for the office staff :( Their leader is seriously out of line, must be hard to follow him...

[shingo_sama]

Don't worry, It'll come clear soon! I feel sorry for the staff too, but Roy has to be a...well you know xD

[ozit]

very good

[shingo_sama]

Thank you!

[akari_hayashi]

Oh so sad... But maybe you should take away the underlining... My eyes getting blurred...

[shingo_sama]

I'm sorry! I really am! Lj did something and everything messed up afterwards, now I don't know what to do

[akari_hayashi]

Hmm... Maybe you can go back to the entry and check out the coding? You may have forgotten to close an underline code in the first part of the entry. HTML is a bitch but we have to deal with it. ^^;

[shingo_sama]

TT can you teach me to use it?