Comments | shinetae: [Fic] The Happiest Days for Patzmelody01;PG13

shinetae

[Fic] The Happiest Days for Patzmelody01;PG13

Jun 29, 2011 23:39

The Happiest Days...
Couple: MinKey/Broken!MinKey, cheating/bff!JongKey, side!JongYu, MinhoxYuri (blegh...)
Genre: AU, Romance, Angst
Rated: PG13
Summary: Cheating on his husband with his best friend was only the second biggest mistake in Kim Kibum's life. Marrying Minho was the absolute biggest mistake of Kibum’s life. Not because he didn’t love him ( Read more... )

fanfic, the happiest days, shinetae

Comments 11

I remembered again! shinetae June 30 2011, 09:40:32 UTC

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Patzmelody01

Re: I remembered again! patzmelody01 June 30 2011, 10:13:24 UTC

WEEH!
Once I get my computer connection working again, I'll reply properly to both post. > <
-brb, reading.-

Re: I remembered again! patzmelody01 June 30 2011, 22:54:47 UTC

Shinetae, I’m so sorry that my long comments have disappeared for a while. My computer is being a bitch right now so I could only return to my long comments today.

So, I’ll start by saying that; THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING MY PROMPT. I can’t say enough to show how thankful I am and that you write it so beautifully heartbreaking.

So…commenting like this and making story banners is all that I can really do despite of all the time and efforts that you’ve put into creating this. I really am both sorry and thankful.

There was once a time where Kim Kibum was a hard-working, dedicated, economically wise and moderately successful man. A time where he was a down-to-earth, respectful and considerate employee, son, friend and neighbor. The old Key, the selfish, spoiled party animal who did nothing for himself was soon a thing of the past.I’m so happy that Kibum is getting his life back together after he ruined everything that he had with Minho by cheating on Jonghyun ( ... )

Re: I remembered again! patzmelody01 June 30 2011, 22:55:10 UTC

there was still something missing from his life, no matter how content he was with having nothing but what he needed. Something he still selfishly, greedily longed for that he knew he would never deserve or have a chance to have again, and yet could not stop himself from wanting it.....Minho.
Of course it’s Minho honey.
It’s obvious that you love him so much. I’m sure that underneath all the hate/disappointed that he felt after you cheated on him, that he still really, really loves you too.

Memories of Minho, every day and night he had spent at his side replayed over and over again in his head when he closed his eyes. He found himself missing him, wishing he could share the few happy moments he had spent in the orphanage or volunteering with the other man because he knew how much it would mean to him if he was still there. Because he knew how much he still loved him.
Makes me think of Key crying himself to sleep everything.
/sob.
I love crying-at-night Key.

Jonghyun stopped in the middle of a bite and glared angrily at the ( ... )

melalocket June 30 2011, 11:33:23 UTC

kibumieee you beeing a better person!!!!!

jongkeyisntreal June 30 2011, 22:18:49 UTC

Hmm, you're updating waaay fatsre than you did for Remember Me!?! so I guess I have to comment faster ( ... )

minkey91 June 30 2011, 22:27:31 UTC

oh, another minkey series by you!
i didn;t even know until i saw it on tumblr. > <

anyways, i love this! but why must key cheat. it makes me sad to see broken minkey for now (saying for now because they have to end up together in the end or else ill be sad.) :(

WILL HE SEE MINHOOO IN HILO! GAAASP!

keyjung July 1 2011, 02:49:10 UTC

i know whats going to happen!
minkey will met each other again right?! im so excited!
please update soon. :)