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Apr 03, 2011 23:48


Remember Me!?!
Chapter 30: PART ONE Vacation
Pairings: MinKey/JongKey (!side: YunJae)
Genre: Angst, Romance, Triangle, Drama
Rated: PG13
Summary: The pain of being torn apart by the heart longing for two separate lovers can tear away at one’s soul and exhaust them until they are unable to feel anymore. Like overworking in an office or physically ( Read more... )

fanfic, reemember me, shinetae

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patzmelody01 April 4 2011, 21:58:51 UTC
SPPPOOOOOT!

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patzmelody01 April 5 2011, 21:29:08 UTC
“I…” Kibum started, as he kept his head down. “I don’t want to leave you, Jonggie. I don’t want to leave you behind in my past and forget all about you. I don’t want to live on without you and forget everything we’ve done together. I don’t want to replace you in my heart. You mean so much to me. I love you so much…I don’t want for those feelings to go away. I don’t want to leave you and love another…” He quickly rubbed the single tear that found its way to his cheek, before glancing up slowly at Minho’s sleeping figure, unable to notice that their eyes connected in the darkness.
I don’t want to leave you and love another…
WHAAAAAAAAAAT? D:
LOVE WHO?!

How could he interpret this as anything other than how he felt about Minho? When he had gone to the fortune teller’s place, his now unnoticed feelings for Minho he had always felt-they became so clear to him that now he was left scared of them. For how long? For how long had he felt such things for Minho? Why didn’t he ever see it before? His love for Jonghyun-he thought before that ( ... )

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patzmelody01 April 5 2011, 21:29:46 UTC
Minho glanced at Kibum a little nervously, but half smiled. “Is that okay? I know that it’s still technically winter, but it’s almost march and I checked the temperatures when you were in the shower this morning. It’s supposed to be really warm there already, despite the season. I was even able to set up renting water-ski supplies in advance.” He said slowly, as he took a seat, leaving Kibum the seat next to the window, though slightly nervous that Kibum would be upset about his impulsiveness. “Do you want to go? I considered asking you before…a-ah, I probably should have…” He started uneasily.
WHY ARE YOU SO SWEET.
NVM- KEEP DOING THAT. KEY WILL FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU MORE.
>:D

“Because…..” Minho started nervously. “Because last night, after we got home, and you stayed awake all night i-in m-my arms…I could feel the stress and fatigue in your body. When I saw your face this morning, I could see how much you needed some relief. Key…you’re overworking yourself, regardless of whether it is physically or emotionally. If you keep on like ( ... )

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patzmelody01 April 5 2011, 21:30:23 UTC
“You haven’t finally left me for good this time….have you?”
Ugh. I wish. =))
But you still need closure before you finally give Key to Minho. Or else, there will be hell to pay on both sides.

This led to being held by the hand all day, pulled through all the markets, shopping, tourist stops, and ice cream shops along the way.
It reminds me of the time when Kibum confessed that Minho brought this 185 dollars cardigan for him and all I could think of is how cute they would have looked like shopping around the mall, with Kibum clinging onto him pointing at everything he wants to buy and Minho will just be there smiling at him.
ASDFGHJKL!

Minho couldn’t help himself from smiling contently as he thought about Kibum’s happy face as he gobbled down the sugary home-made ice cream, succeeding in getting it all over his face, and relying on Minho to slowly (after a long time of blushing) wipe it off for him.
Why you make me fall in love with Minkey more than I already do?! ;_;

Kibum glanced down slowly, keeping the same soft smile, but ( ... )

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Update? Update?! Update! lubzyou April 4 2011, 23:06:36 UTC
SPOT!

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Re: Update? Update?! Update! lubzyou April 5 2011, 02:06:54 UTC
‘WHAT THE HELL DID THAT STUPID ALIEN DO WITH MY KIBUM!?!’ - XD I love your Jonghyun so much!

The whole of the pool scene, I’m like, “KEY! Are you trying to drive the boy crazy?!”

I know that Minho is so sweet and deserving
I know that Jonghyun, in his crazy way, needs Key
I know that, for now, Key needs both of them.
Wae do you do this to me? I could have cared less about MinKey but this chapter wrenched at something traitorous in my chest.

Love you, love you

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giveitupjessica April 4 2011, 23:52:37 UTC
i feel even more bad for minho because he just had the best vacay with key and he had to lie to him in the end. plus he wasn't with key the way he wanted to be with him. :(

but at least key is finally realizing his feeling for minho. so yay!

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nicolaaa2929 April 5 2011, 07:36:33 UTC
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
SPOTTTTTTTTTTTTT

anyway
basically.
MINKEY ♥
MINKEY ♥
MINKEY ♥
MINKEY ♥
MINKEY ♥

I LOVE THIS CHAPTERRRRRRRRRR!

I have made my decision on who i want to be the end coupling...
and i want...
I. want. MinKey.
Done deal.
JongKey can be done :D.

BUT YEAH!
I was like ";_____; NOOOO!" when i finished the chapter, but then i saw part two and i was like FTWWWWWWWWWW!

SO YEAH, im gonna go read that :D

Thanks for writing and posting hon, and please keep doing so! ^____^

♥♥♥♥♥

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texuecho April 14 2011, 22:33:53 UTC
keep posting like this it’s really very good idea, you are awesome!

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