[FIC] Wisdom From the Mouth of a Fool

[shineq]

Title: Wisdom From the Mouth of a Fool

Comments

[miss_aztec57]

W-O-W. That was incredible, and its not something you read everyday about those two. I thought its was really amazing. I love how you gave them a new level which most other writers don't do. It was really sad and emotional but just wonderfully written. Your description was perfect. When Antonio said:

“This is my resentment making itself known, you little shit.”

My mouth just dropped and I was like 'woah Spain.'

I really, really enjoyed this, (as sad as it was)

[shineq]

Trying a different take on those two (as well as writing Spain the way I did) was quite fun.

Thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. :D

[harosketch]

My gosh. Just... wow. This was stunning... a truly different outlook on these two. It was so raw and well thought out.

[shineq]

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so.

[yuuko_81]

woo, this is amazing. So moving, and the characters so well portrayed. LOVED IT!

[shineq]

Thank you! I apologize for being unable to say anything more than a heartfelt thank you.

[lylith_st]

Excuse me lame english, I'm from Spain myself :P THis fic was awesome, I have not enough words to describe it. You captured all the drama of the war and the character's personalities so well.. <3

[shineq]

You being from Spain - I'm honestly very embarassed and at the same time thankful that I didn't mess this up the way I thought I most probably did. I was seriously scared of offending too. And thank you! Your words mean a lot.

[lylith_st]

I am, I am. I think tha tyou did a relaly good job, trust me :D

Welcome! ^__^I will look forward for more fics.

[ghibli22]

That was so incredibly moving. I love you so hard.

The line about finding Antonio's room was absolute magic. :)

[shineq]

I... love that line too as embarrasing as it is to admit. And thank you! I appreciate the comments.