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Let's... [Week 10 ; Prompt 10 ; In Love]

Nov 22, 2008 14:04

Title: Let's...
Author: whitefoxbuns
Rating: PG
Pairing: onew/taemin
Word Count: 436
Genre: little angst, drama
Warning: Just a sad Taemin
Summary: Problem of Love
A/N: Hello! this is my first time writing a challenge drabble for this community. I think this place is awesome ^_^ so many talented writers.

( It's 10 PM and you are by yourself, lying like a bum on his bed, )

*contest 1, author: whitefoxbuns, c: in love

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pinkfluffies November 23 2008, 15:34:41 UTC

‘Oh the problem of being in love’
Always a problem. -nods-
♥

whitefoxbuns November 23 2008, 15:48:25 UTC

hehehe! thank you for replying
i thought my writing was so
BAD people don't want to reply
it's still not as nice as others here
^^

kami_no_kami November 23 2008, 15:54:09 UTC

aigooooo~

my poor baby taemin! D: gawsh...who knew being in-love would be a problem!

so teary ;A; awwww~~~

it wasn't that bad though! I liked it~<3

whitefoxbuns November 23 2008, 15:57:50 UTC

eheheh!! lookie @ ur icon!!
my TM should call UR JAE "umma" ahahah
thanks for reading, my first time writing
ontae, but yeah, drabble sometimes are not my
style. I write fic! WOOHOOO

nyappyx3 November 24 2008, 03:52:10 UTC

Nice. Kinda iffy in some places, the word choice and stuff, but it's all good. :)

whitefoxbuns November 24 2008, 04:21:00 UTC

thank you ^^, sorry, I write complex and long sentences ALOT
OMO!! your ONTAE ICON!
*glomps u*

nyappyx3 November 24 2008, 05:55:18 UTC

Hahaha. It's okay, there are iffy parts about my writing too. It just takes practice.
xD ONTAE. I'm starting to like them a lot loll.
*is glomped*

ishundania December 5 2008, 04:46:55 UTC

Really beautiful. The images you write paint a picture of love. Very, very, beautiful.

whitefoxbuns December 5 2008, 05:06:47 UTC

thank you so much ^^ it's nice to know
my work is being appreciated, I like to write
a lot and comments are always the vitamin!

mtfanatic January 19 2009, 02:05:48 UTC

Wow, this gives a nice picture. They are too cute. SHINee never fails to make me smile all the time XD

whitefoxbuns January 19 2009, 18:53:09 UTC

me too~ they are one special group, who is your favorite member?

mtfanatic January 19 2009, 18:54:57 UTC

Yeah they really are. At first I didn't want to like them but I fell for their cuteness and then realized wow they really have talent.
My fav member is Mama Key. But I love Daddy Onew second.

whitefoxbuns January 19 2009, 18:56:44 UTC

my favorite is baby Taemin although, in some cases, he does not look like a baby but more of manly taemin HAHA

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