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SHINee Shorts 2013: amlui

Sep 08, 2013 12:11

Title: Learning the Shape of Things
Author: amlui
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: No knowledge of the Korean education system :(
Word Count: 7,408

( Jinki can’t even say his name and worries that after Mr Kim Kibum reports back to the principal, they’ll send him back to America with a silver ‘good try’ sticker on his forehead )

pairing: onew/minho, *2013, rating: pg-13

Comments 4

kpopforlife September 9 2013, 02:17:48 UTC

ka;ljfdkjd;flksdjf all of the cute. Onho making out in their classroom... presh.

star_chase September 9 2013, 19:32:33 UTC

I really, really enjoyed reading this fic! Your writing was engaging and easy to read, it flowed nicely, and I liked your characterisation of Jinki and Minho! I liked the situation, and I like how their relationship developed over time! (kissing in the classroom, omg!) I liked that it was Jinki who initiated the first kiss, too!

The little moments you put in there, developing things, Minho being jealous of the little boy, the way they unknowingly look at each other, ugh. all of that was so fun to read! And I'm really glad Jinki was planning on coming back ;~; the end of the fic was so nice, and simple, and lovely as well!

I don't know if this comment is any good to you, but I just want you to know I really liked this, thank you so much for writing it! I love onho, and I loved this, and now you too ;; ♥

blacknerdjade September 15 2013, 02:53:59 UTC

So cute! So very very cute! I was so worried until the end!

jinkho September 15 2013, 04:26:38 UTC

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