you do not know how thankful i am for this. when i got back home last night, this was the first thing i saw on my flist. i was like, oh for nighttimefalls! for me! and then i saw the word count i thought twas a typo but it says "1/4" o___o i was like holy shit this is like a mini chaptered fic!
i can't believe my lame prompt became this 36,000+ words worth of onkey goodness. maybe you were thinking why i requested such story, something which is not christmas-y, at all (i'm kind of obsessed with historical/war/war orphan stories so :( i'm sorry if my prompt was vague or was a pain or anything). irdk what to say. i love reading jinki as a general (:Q________) and the twists in this are just, win.
will be quoting lines which struck me the most!
They grew up and learnt how to deal with their responsibilities, their individual duties. Jinki swore loyalty to Jonghyun, the King, and rather than being awkward and uncomfortable, it just gave another meaning to his vows. For appearances, they kept a façade of King and
( ... )
Kibum. Jinki’s heart quivered; the fool’s heart quivered. -- rising to the climax. damn, i felt like was watching a movie. seriously.
Father…I’m sorry, but I’m not here to seek forgiveness for my past sins. I want god to forgive me for my future ones.
And what would those future sins be my son?
…Everything I will do the moment I set a foot out of this Church. -- my eyes were all watery in this part but i was holding back my tears cos my sister's inside my room.
He loved the man, and he knew that Jinki wasn’t a man of victory or defeat. He was a man of sacrifices if it meant protecting the ones he loved.
The End. -- my tears were freely falling at this moment. i love how "the end" was so simple but it tells a lot, in actuality.
Wishing he could’ve see Kibum’s face one more time. To see his dimpled smile. Watch him laugh as he tilted his head unconsciously to his shoulder. See those feline eyes sparkling with happiness, with love. He wanted to believe that at one point, Kibum might have loved him. He wanted to die with that
( ... )
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS IS SO GOOD. I READ IT ALL AND IT TOOK ME LIKE 2 HOURS BUT IT WAS WORTH IT everything about it was amazing, the plot line and all! I have to say I predicted that Kibum was the spy but not the King, so when that part was revealed I was literally like NOOOO KIBUUUUM WHYYYYYYYYY but then finding out it was all for a good cause was great and omg TT I love it <3 The End
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you do not know how thankful i am for this. when i got back home last night, this was the first thing i saw on my flist. i was like, oh for nighttimefalls! for me! and then i saw the word count i thought twas a typo but it says "1/4" o___o i was like holy shit this is like a mini chaptered fic!
i can't believe my lame prompt became this 36,000+ words worth of onkey goodness. maybe you were thinking why i requested such story, something which is not christmas-y, at all (i'm kind of obsessed with historical/war/war orphan stories so :( i'm sorry if my prompt was vague or was a pain or anything). irdk what to say. i love reading jinki as a general (:Q________) and the twists in this are just, win.
will be quoting lines which struck me the most!
They grew up and learnt how to deal with their responsibilities, their individual duties. Jinki swore loyalty to Jonghyun, the King, and rather than being awkward and uncomfortable, it just gave another meaning to his vows. For appearances, they kept a façade of King and ( ... )
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-- rising to the climax. damn, i felt like was watching a movie. seriously.
Father…I’m sorry, but I’m not here to seek forgiveness for my past sins. I want god to forgive me for my future ones.
And what would those future sins be my son?
…Everything I will do the moment I set a foot out of this Church.
-- my eyes were all watery in this part but i was holding back my tears cos my sister's inside my room.
He loved the man, and he knew that Jinki wasn’t a man of victory or defeat. He was a man of sacrifices if it meant protecting the ones he loved.
The End.
-- my tears were freely falling at this moment. i love how "the end" was so simple but it tells a lot, in actuality.
Wishing he could’ve see Kibum’s face one more time. To see his dimpled smile. Watch him laugh as he tilted his head unconsciously to his shoulder. See those feline eyes sparkling with happiness, with love. He wanted to believe that at one point, Kibum might have loved him. He wanted to die with that ( ... )
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Why is this not a movie yet??
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everything about it was amazing, the plot line and all! I have to say I predicted that Kibum was the spy but not the King, so when that part was revealed I was literally like NOOOO KIBUUUUM WHYYYYYYYYY
but then finding out it was all for a good cause was great and omg TT
I love it <3
The End
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