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From: Your (Emergency) Secret Santa
Title: Gut Feeling
Pairing: girl!Onew/Taemin (Eunsook/Taeyeon)
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 3,714
Summary: Eunsook moves in across the hall from Taeyeon and turns her world upside down.
( It was a weird time to move in, Taeyeon thought. )
From: Your (Emergency) Secret Santa
Title: Gut Feeling
Pairing: girl!Onew/Taemin (Eunsook/Taeyeon)
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 3,714
Summary: Eunsook moves in across the hall from Taeyeon and turns her world upside down.
( It was a weird time to move in, Taeyeon thought. )
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Taeyeon turned around, startled, to find the girl from that afternoon standing at the threshold of her apartment, looking uncomfortable and shy. o this i just wibbled when i read this, oh eunsook ;w;
oh god i love how horrifically awkward their first, like, three encounters are. i love how you made taeyeon this...~aloof character sort of, it's perfect for her. and how eunsook always catches her at the right time and starts the conversations so feebly agh ♥
where the two people involved took turns catching each other’s eyes and smiling before looking away before they held their eye contact for too long. oh so cute ;w;
the two of them only experiencing a couple of awkward silences- one of which was when Eunsook almost choked on her rice. omg eunsook ;__; i love when she's as clumsy as onew hahaha ( ... )
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yes i couldn't help but include Gwiboon/Taeyeon bffery.
and Minjung/BoA b/c i ship them too. haha.
i'm glad that you liked my aloof!taeyeon. i didn't set out to make her like that, but it's just how she reacted to everything. idek. lol.
but i love this comment from you b/c you caught all of the little nuances that i added ♥
thanks so much for the lovely comment and i'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
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