Go To Sleep

[shineemod_y]

Title: Go To Sleep
Prompt: #31
For: sweetstreet on aff
Pairing: Jongkey
Author: >anonymous until reveals<
Word count: 1972
Rating: R
Warnings: mentions of insomnia, sex; language
Summary: Jonghyun doesn't sleep. Kibum wished he was the one who didn't.

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Even a stopped clock tells the right time twice a day. Even the most tormented heart works till

Comments

[astaeroid]

thanks for writing this <3 i really enjoyed the way you depicted their sleeping problems. i liked how kibum starts affecting jonghyun even before they become close, how kibum at first hesitates to let jonghyun in and how they fall into things.

and this:

(Kibum wished that he could feel all of the burning skin touching his, he really longed to feel him whole. No clothes between them, no useless layers, he wanted them back to the way they were brought into this world. But when they fuck, they almost always fuck at least half-clothed. No time to take a t-shirt off, the position they are in is so nice, Jonghyun doesn't bother pulling off his or Kibum's pants, depending on the position. But he always manages to drag a hand across Kibum's nipples under his soft white t-shirt with turquoise letters on it, because the look on his face is worth an extra-movement.
Sometimes Kibum wonderes what was the reason for it, but never long enough.)

this kind of non fluffly romance is so cool.

also, extra points for jonghyun's imsomniac rambling.

[grailmis]

omgg thank you so much for such a detailed comment. i didn't think this piece came out good and it's unbeta'd (i already spotted some mistakes but whatever) so i didn't expect anyone to leave a comment, especially such a thorough one. i'm glad you enjoyed it and its dynamic!

"non fluffy romance" - i really like how that sounds. jonghyun's ramblings were nice to write because they do coincide with mine haha..

thank you again!! ♡

[renaxia]

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