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SBB 2016 Entry #14: bloom

Jul 29, 2016 19:17

title: bloom
pairing: onew/jonghyun/taemin
rating: r
genre: university au
Warnings: none
final word count: 10150

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pairing: ot3, rating: r, shineebigbang2016: submissions

Comments 8

mewaqua1 August 1 2016, 21:56:26 UTC

love this fic!! Very nicely written onjongtae! i enjoyed how this ot3 was done and how the fic also dealed with how ppl would judge and them openly discussing being a ot3 and making it work so well~

kpopforlife August 3 2016, 01:26:36 UTC

wow this was so good! I loved the subtle differences between their individual relationships, as well as their relationship as a group. Just really all around wonderful...

imvus August 3 2016, 18:50:01 UTC

This was such a wonderful story. You wrote it so well that i think i felt all of taemin's emotions.

How you broke down each relationship taemin had was very gratifying and fit so well into the story.

Also how you broke down this relationship between the 3 lovers was beautiful. How could he not fall in love with both of them and they in return.

The touches of humor was perfect.

The loss of jinki to their threesome as he leaves school gave me such feels....

And you provided just enough sexual details to make us aware but not to take away from the emotions and feelings of the story.

Well done!!!!!!♥

pinkpassiontae August 6 2016, 04:28:49 UTC

"We find different things in different people, Taemin would grow to understand, and if we burden one person with all our expectations then we’ll never be happy."
-This story if full of so many pretty little moments that make you pause while it gives you hope.

pinkpassiontae August 9 2016, 20:10:13 UTC

"Taemin stared at his back in the mirror as if Jinki had left fingerprints. Dust him down and the world would know what they had done."
-This kind of broke my heart because it could be read a myriad of ways & it felt bittersweet.

m0_shiznik August 11 2016, 02:42:55 UTC

Ah this was so good! I loved the writing style - it was so achingly beautiful! The dynamics between onjongtae were just surreal in how realistic and open and accepting they were. I can't quite describe how it came off... But it was just so lovely that it made this fic so enjoyable and a quick read because I never wanted it to end!