SBB 2015 ENTRY #21: THE SWEETNESS OF THE ICE CREAM BOY (2/2)
Title: The Sweetness of the Ice Cream Boy (2/2)
Pairing: Minho/Jonghyun
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, swearing
Final Word Count: 13,350
( He couldn't focus on anything, on nothing more than the satisfaction that sweetly colored the Boy's cheeks, the happiness evident in his eyes, and the small pool of ice cream that collected at the opening of his lips.Minho wanted to kiss that ice cream away. He wondered what the Boy tasted like.
The Boy’s tongue flicked out, ran slowly along his lips.
Now Minho wanted to die. )
Pairing: Minho/Jonghyun
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, swearing
Final Word Count: 13,350
( He couldn't focus on anything, on nothing more than the satisfaction that sweetly colored the Boy's cheeks, the happiness evident in his eyes, and the small pool of ice cream that collected at the opening of his lips.Minho wanted to kiss that ice cream away. He wondered what the Boy tasted like.
The Boy’s tongue flicked out, ran slowly along his lips.
Now Minho wanted to die. )
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seriously. i love all the characterizations so so so much. i loved every single bit of this fic, the humor, the setup, everything. so. cute.
a+++ on everything about roo and how jongho got her too, the naming part was especially creative ahh
also this: "Minho awoke with Jonghyun curled up into his chest, Minho’s arms around him. Damn, he was so tiny. Minho wondered briefly why anyone would date someone who wasn’t small enough to hold like this." line was Absolutely Perfect and i just needed to express how much i love that, and everything else in this fic, because it's golden
amazing job, thank you so much for writing it!!
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I was actually really worried about the characterization so I'm glad it worked out!!
"Golden" is such a sweet thing to say too. Wahhhhh thank you for reading and commenting! Oh and congrats on your win! ヽ(=^･ω･^=)丿
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was
so
freaking
CUTE
excuse me as i cry and try to hold mySElf tOGETHER AND TRY TO ARTICULATE MY THOUGHTS
this was seriously everything i needed in a fic i don't even know where to start i love everything about it
really, really loved the characterizations and i love how when jonghyun got roo minho helped named her and it mirrors irl
and i love how the whole time jonghyun has also been calling minho 'ice cream boy' aND THATS JUST SO CUTE
i really loved how their relationship flowed and how minho was a cute nervous bb who just had a big crush on jonghyun and this was so lovely to read and really look forward to being able to read future things from you! thank you so much for blessing my life with this fic i really needed this <3
also
tiny jjong /weeps
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And I actually totally forgot about Minho actually naming her irl hahaha that connection was totally unintentional.
I'm so glad I wrote something you enjoyed and "needed" and hope I can maybe do the same again in the future wahhh~
and tiny jjong makes me cry too he makes us all cry.
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but omfg thank you so much!!!!! :D
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ohhh my god this was seriously so cute im so weak right now ;; every single jongho interaction was so precious. every time minho freaked out about how cute jonghyun was, i wanted to simultaneously laugh and hug him. poor melodramatic baby with a crush! and jonghyun was so cute omg little EMT who wants a puppy. can i just ... *smothers myself in this fic*
and then there was smut? and it was so hot and i just...???
this fic was just so warm and humorous it was like being cuddled by a fic
i just loved this so much i want to hold this fic close to my chest like a puppy and whisper soft loving words to it
*faceplants into fluff*
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I'm very glad you enjoyed this and found it so cute!! And I'm so glad you enjoyed the smut, as that part was difficult to write wah!!! And poor Minho was struggling! boy needed some support to approach someone as cute as Jonghyun heehee
I'm very glad this fic cuddled you~ it's like me cuddling you through words and I like that!!
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