SBB 2010 Entry #2 - Color Theory (2/2)

[phasera]

Title: Color Theory
Pairing/Focus: Taemin focus, former Key/Taemin
Rating: R
Word Count: 12,539

Comments

[bopeep_achu]

OMG IF IT WEREN'T SEVEN IN THE MORNIG i'D REALLY CRY..
oh fuck caps abuse spoilt my mood
anyhow
this was indeed beautiful.. I hated Key in this... so much that I doodled his picture with paint.... and taemin... I felt so sorry for him.. everything was pictured perfectly in my head.. I wished for minho and taemin to be together tjo; sometimes in the future.. but then again
beautiful piece
I wish I could mem this

[itachibana13]

oh my god. just. my heart. i don't even know. i was so close to tears and holy crap i just don't even know.

it made me feel so many different emotions while reading it, and just. i can't even piece together a coherent comment right now. the despair i felt during all of taemin's hardships was unbearable, i felt myself getting mad at everyone and everything. how taemin had grown up through everything he went through, and struggling to find out who he is, even trying to start all over with minho. it was all just so heartbreaking. and everything taesun went through too, struggling as well. i just have no proper comment.

i think what effected me the most was his dad. and just. this part.

The phone is fine but Taemin gets slapped, clean and sharp, when a stray condom Taemin didn’t know he missed is found at the bottom of his pajama drawer.

“Not my son.” His father hisses and Taemin can’t bring himself to look at him.

“Sorry.” Taemin whispers. “I’m really very sorry.”i almost started crying right then and there. and his mother, when he

[faded_citylites]

oh shit i'm so fuckin speechless.
and if i weren't so busy trying to keep the tears from running free, i'd write you a proper comment.
but yeah. there's so much in this fic that i'd like to point out and thoroughly praise you for, but i can't really find the words to do it.
so ima just leave my lame comment here. and. yeah.
loved this beyond what my words can express♥

[sol_tama]

This was just so real. I really hurt for Taemin throughout everything and it was so beautifully written as well. ;~;

[spacejunks]

Reading this was painful. It was when Taemin finally met Key that I finally realized this is about the pain of not being able to find acceptance. When Taemin trembled upon having Key's sight set on him, I thought, oh god this is not going to end well at all. For me, the most hurtful thing here was what Key said about "how long forever lasts" and I just... I know it's the narrative voice, the same one that is Taemin being self-effacing within, but ugh that line was so painful