SBB 2011 Entry #17: Chains

Jul 09, 2011 10:28

Title: Chains
Pairing/Focus: Kibum/Taemin; Heechul/Taemin, Heechul/Kibum
Rating: R
Final word count: 10,117
Summary: When Kibum comes home to find that he has been replaced, he knows that his life will never be the same. AU. Warnings for slavery, non-con, violence, and general adult themes.

Kibum's life collapses in any number of ways. )

rating: r, pairing: key/taemin, shineebigbang2011: submissions

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bakagreenirene July 10 2011, 19:35:36 UTC
OH MY GOD

words can't explain my love for this story!!! it's simply exquisite!! I probably sound like an ass right now who can only express herself in cliches but seriously this is just soooo sooo good!!

i'm normally not even really into taekey but i was hooked on this from the very beginning! it's just such a fresh idea and a PERFECT execution, definitely one of the best fanfics i've read!!! it just made me THINK and FEEL so much at once being so angsty and funny and clever and witty and hopeful all rolled up in one. I had a lot of favorite lines in this, too many to count!! the quality of your work is just great

awesome job!!! awesome!!!! i loved the ending. I liked how taekey was explicitly romantic but like something hinted, something in between. And i feel all sad for key because of his situation but at the same time it's fluffy too and hopeful so everything just came together so well.

ACKkkkkk i should stop now. anyways i'm voting for you!!

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chocolatos July 12 2011, 19:18:14 UTC
you know what, somehow i really want to say how i hate you so much for writing this, but i couldn't seem to find a word because i'm fucking crying right now =="
i hardly ... not ever cry over a fic and you've done a great deal with this one, lol

Kibum... i only wonder until when he could keep up with all those sickness parade from Heechul.

I want to like Taemin here, but i can't..

overall, just ignore what i wrote above
it's... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... too much emotion flooded but thank you, whoever you are, this is (avoiding the word 'awesome') magical
hehehe

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chocolatos July 12 2011, 19:23:45 UTC
AND OH, those hinted OnKey, 2Min moment, and sooo ninja-ish Jongkey =))

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miss_circle July 15 2011, 06:52:27 UTC
I don't even know how I can start explaining how I feel about this story.
It's terrifying, masochistic, and yet it's so beautiful to a numbing degree, I can just sit here in front of my screen. Speechless.

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oo_ink_art_oo July 18 2011, 07:08:35 UTC
I admit that I was a little disappointed that there was no link to "part 2" of this story where Key and Taemin somehow escape and find their way back to Taemin's family and live happily ever after, but then I realized that the possibility of that happening was so low and I like the open ending much better.

Key was such a fleshed out character that his emotions just oozed off the page.

I loved this, no matter how demented it was.

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wykedpanda July 19 2011, 06:19:31 UTC
Oh, my heart just clenched for Key in this fic. Thank you for sharing~

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