This... was beautiful. The language, the characterization, everything. Eclair seems to be a really under appreciated character, I've noticed, but I think you've captured her and her feelings for Tamaki brilliantly here. It was sad but still hopeful; and I loved the ending with Tamaki asking her to come with him back to Japan, and with the opera glasses.
Lovely; I love Éclair this way. Only one little thing; it should be "vous êtez", not "vous est", as "est" is the infinitive form, and "êtez" the second person of the plural, or the second polite person.
Oh wow! This was wonderful. You did an amazing job with their characters, especially Eclair. I've never seen anyone represent her so thrillingly spot-on before, and you did great justice to her character.
I particularly liked this line: He’s so good with girls. She wonders if she will ever be the one he cares about most, and not just another girl to please.
That's an astounding perception of Tamaki on Eclair's part. I'm glad we get to see that subtle observant side to her. Magnificent job!
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I loved it. *mems*
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You captured Eclair so well! She's so rarely used in fics and makes even less IC appearances in the fandom >< Good job b(^0^)d
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*fixes it*
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I particularly liked this line:
He’s so good with girls. She wonders if she will ever be the one he cares about most, and not just another girl to please.
That's an astounding perception of Tamaki on Eclair's part. I'm glad we get to see that subtle observant side to her. Magnificent job!
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