The Symptoms

[shinebunny]

Tite: The Symptoms
Pairing: UlquiHime
Rating: K+
Notes: Because UlquiHime is an addiction. If not completely canon. xD  I've had this written for a while, so hopefully all that time cooling will have helped it to refine itself more than a piece like Chivalry that was spur-of-the-moment. This one is also more from Orihime's point of view, which gives

Comments

[e_eleniel]

Written in a very original way and so beautiful... Really well done analysis of her mind and psyche... congrats.

[ellethill]

Loved the end, short and suggestive and to the point. Also loved the, quote, /fuzzy, uncertain flavor of friendship/ permeating it, and the rhythm you gave her thoughts.

Yay for goodfic!

[theborder]

I really really love the way you wrote this! Original, thoughtful, and I love it when people write out their thoughts and perspective on scenes that have happened in the manga. I especially like how you made the fifth part Stockholm Syndrome, heehee.

[p_sky]

I agree that UlquiHime is a total addiction, but can we help it? Their dynamics are great XD

It's written in a very unique way and I love it~ But at the same time, I feel so bad for Hime >

[shinebunny]

You like UlquiHime too? *gawks* (But shhh! xD Don't tell the rest of our RP. I'd get stoned, lulz.)

I don't know why I enjoy writing a disturbed!Hime so much. I guess it just leaves her a little more vulnerable and gets her to liking her kidnappers, although she's so nice I think that's (to an extent) happened already.

[p_sky]

It shall be our little secret ;)

And I do like Ulquihime if only for their interactions XD It brings out the best in them I think; it makes them both so much more multi-layered =)
I prefer Ichihime for romance though ^^

[renuki]

Heh, very interesting indeed.

*grins*