Ficlet: Sleight of Hand

[shinealightonme]

Title: Sleight of Hand
Fandom: Stargate: SG-1/Warehouse 13
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Vala, Mrs. Frederic; gen
Prompt: Vala Mal Doran walks into a bar and meets Irene Frederic.
Author's Note: written for

Comments

[rosesama35]

So as I soon as I read the summary, I squeaked a little. Never before could I have imagined such an interesting crossover! Vala, and Ms. F...and the Warehouse! Oh, there I've gone and squeaked again! Okay, on with the review!

So as I was reading I only noticed two tiny litter errors. I think you skipped a word after Vala sensed the naquadah. "while her _____ raced, wonder who..." THat's where it is! And you missed a "t" at the end of the word "sight" towards the end. But that's all.

I freakin' enjoyed this little fic so much. I really want more now! The thought of another savvy British woman in the Warehouse just makes me giggle like a silly fan girl! But this was awesome, so thanks so much for writing it, even if it wasn't for me!

~RoseSama35~ They call me...'Tater Salad!

[shinealightonme]

Thanks for the feedback! The crossover is a little out there, so I'm glad that it grabbed you, and that you enjoyed the fic. (I wasn't able to get this beta'd, so I appreciate your pointing out the errors, as well. All better now!)

[rosesama35]

Oh you are very welcome. I'm always more than happy to give feedback on people's stories. As a writer myself, I know how important it is. And I'm glad that I could help out! ^)^

~RoseSama35~ They call me...'Tater Salad!