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[Kaleidoscope revision] Colours | 8. Unforeseen Attachments

Jul 05, 2013 00:09

Chapter 8 of Colours (the first "book" of Kaleidoscope) has been revised and is now up at FanFiction.net.

Kaleidoscope (I): Colours
8. Unforeseen Attachments (3690 words | PG)
[also on FF.N] [ old LJ version at metamorfic_moonThe Weasley twins apply their formidable research and development skills to the problem of Walburga Black’s portrait, but things go ( Read more... )

revision, remus/tonks, kaleidoscope, stories

Comments 4

huldrejenta July 5 2013, 12:19:03 UTC

I haven't read this in quite some time, and it was a lovely re-read!
I love Fred and George, and you certainly do them justice here. Clever, funny and energetic:)

Remus is, as always, adorable, getting so much joy and comfort from Tonks, yet unable to see the real reasons why. Your Remus wouldn't allow his thoughts to go in that direction at all, probably.

I feel so bad for Sirius - the year stuck in Grimmauld Place must have been terrible for him in more ways that one. I can't help but think that when three teenagers managed to stay hidden for so long in DH, one of whom was REALLY wanted, it must have been possible for Dumbledore to do something that made Sirius able to get out of there every once in a while. Maybe he did, only Harry never knew about it:) Harry obviously missed a lot of things;)

shimotsuki July 8 2013, 03:45:01 UTC

Thanks for re-reading!

I appreciate all your encouragement about the characters here. It was fun to write the twins, and even more fun to write clueless Remus and smug Sirius. ;)

Your Remus wouldn't allow his thoughts to go in that direction at all, probably.

Exactly -- in this ficverse, it just never enters Remus's mind at all that someone might fall for him. Especially someone who knows he's a werewolf. *sigh*

I can't help but think that when three teenagers managed to stay hidden for so long in DH, one of them was REALLY wanted, it must have been possible for Dumbledore to do something that made Sirius able to get out of there every once in a while. Maybe he did, only Harry never knew about it:) Harry obviously missed a lot of things;)Harry did miss a lot! And I do hope for Sirius's sake that he found a way to get out sometimes... But you've put your finger on one of the many things I don't really understand from DH. The way Harry and company were blundering around, it's a miracle they weren't picked up months earlier ( ... )

sspring92 July 8 2013, 05:05:48 UTC

I am thoroughly enjoying the re-do. I get to missing all that RT goodness that we had so much of for awhile! It's like coming home and visiting old friends!
Thanks so much for posting and I anxiously await the rest!

shimotsuki July 9 2013, 02:19:19 UTC

I'm so glad you're having fun with this! I'm having fun working the stories over and cleaning them up.

I can't wait until I get to post Ch 10. ;P That's the one after *sniff* the Veil -- I totally rewrote it and it took me about two weeks until I got it how I wanted it...