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[shihadchick]

Last part of the fic dump from the 'plane last week. This is kind of weird - I was both trying to work in an image that had been sitting in my head since I was (surprise surprise) sitting by the pool the day previous, and also trying to go for a different type of tone with it - I don't think it really worked on the latter point, at least, but I

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[mrsronweasley]

No, make it come back to life! OMG! I love this. And PG, my ASS - the first paragraph was, like, rated XXX, because Jesus, what you can do with words. And just a description! Of a body! Nnnnnrgh. This was so lovely and sensual and it had this beat to it, like waves lapping and retreating - the thoughts, the caveats, the conclusions, all in this one rhythm - it was almost lulling, like water. I could hear the water in the fic, the quiet mood of it, I could hear Sheppard's voice echoing, all of it. God, and in a less than a thousand words, you've built a tremendous fic. This is seriously fucking awesome. Wow. MOREPLZ. (I just realized I may have missed a fic of yours this weekend. Must. Go. READ.)

Loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove!

[shihadchick]

*serious, heavy duty literal blush* oh, wow. thank you, seriously. i was just about to go to bed, and then the email came in, so... yeah. thank you. i'll try? i'm not sure where it was going, exactly, i just (i think this may be obvious?) couldn't get past the John-Sheppard-swimming image. Because. Uh. Yeah. *whimpers quietly*

(and i think i am several of your fics behind actually. must carve time for myself to catch up and enjoy when i am house-sitting later this week. which did i mention? i cannot wait for. getting to snuggle in with the computer and not have to do anything social/house-worky. YAY.)

thank you so much for the fb, Lizka, seriously. means a lot. (and not just because you were fantastically complimentary, either. just- nice to know people are looking. *snuggles you a LOT*)

[mrsronweasley]

Aww, you are so very, very welcome! This was seriously wonderful. And the more I think about it, the more I realize that, of course, it's perfect the way it is, and doesn't need anything else. So, there's that. :P

John Sheppard swimming = motherofgodHOTHOTHOTOMFGWANTNOW

Ahem. Anyway.

and i think i am several of your fics behind actually.

You are? 'Cause...I haven't written anything in, like, over a month. Apart from the Five Fights Ray thing. Which I think you read? So, I totally wouldn't worry about that. *g*

*Squishes with luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurve!*

[shihadchick]

Seriously - I can't stop grinning whenever I look at your comments. Best Liz EVER. And, oh, babe, no need to backpedal there, either - I really did leave it at a queer place (oh, hi Ray) and, um, Kat might be persuading me to write more? if you see below? Heh.

And OH GOD YES ME TOO. Um. Ahem. Uh. Yeah.

...see, I remember opening Five Fights in a tab and bookmarking it, but I didn't actually read it yet so, yeah, I am behind. Like whoa. I was thinking about it and realised I actually never finished reading the badfic challenge or out of contxt, so, uh... I lose at 2006? In general? But I will definitely get there eventually! Though yours takes precedence because, well, it's YOURS. Which means it's guaranteed good.

*snuggles you a very much lot*

[katrin]

Wheeeee! This is so, so great. I totally second what Liz said about the first paragraph, because YUM, and -- yeah, there should be more, with sex in the sauna, and they'd be sweating and panting and slippery, and it would be so, so hot. (Srsly, you know you want to. Slippery.)

[shihadchick]

*grinny* YAY. Am so glad you liked it. Hope the exam went well and all, too. And, okay, I blame you for the fact that while I didn't really get any further with it, I spent all day at work thinking about Rodney getting irritable because he was hot and dripping perspiration into his eyes and it was all very uncomfortable thank you very much because there's Sheppard right there, all languid and smugly slippery and just wearing a towel and Rodney isn't MADE of willpower, you know?

perchaps later, then? *g* you know too well what buttons to presssuggestions to make.

[shihadchick]

not to mention that it would be TERRIBLY UNSAFE for Rodney to take advantage of John in the sauna because it's hot in there and they could get dehydrated and pass out and no one would find them until it was too late and then John would get posthumously dishonorably discharged for fucking up DADT and then Rodney would NEVER get his Nobel.

plus, someone could walk in.

[diluvian]

Mmmmmmmmm. Yum.

[shihadchick]

*GRIN* Thank you!

[the_antichris]

Whee! The description in the first part - I can see it, and you know how visual I'm not, so.

[shihadchick]

oh, really? YAY. thank you kindly, that definitely means a bunch, and especially coming from you, Chris. (also, honest - was not soliciting fb on not-dS fic from you!)