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Expendable (5b/8)

Sep 02, 2012 14:03

TItle: Expendable (5b/8)
Warnings: Language
Summary: America enacts his own plan
A/N: Part two of part five.

( AKA In which England doesn't lift a finger )

amnesia, fanfic, london, dr who

Comments 9

kiyomiuchiha September 2 2012, 23:58:08 UTC

I am really loving this. I can't imagine how this would've been in the comic. You're writing is stunning. I'm very interested to see where this is going. Also, yay for Captain Jack! And by boss, did he mean The Doctor??

otoshigo September 3 2012, 10:47:34 UTC

Yay! Glad you like it! ^__^ Actually, Captain Jack's current boss is Wales.

kiyomiuchiha September 3 2012, 18:00:34 UTC

OH, okay, I don't know that much about Captain Jack.... I've only seen a few episodes of Doctor Who with him. My mistake, sorry

otoshigo September 3 2012, 18:11:44 UTC

Oh, no worries. It has nothing to do with Doctor Who. It was just a random reference in the earlier comic part. Which was a while ago.

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just_a_fangirl September 3 2012, 04:58:28 UTC

OMG! That was hilarious! I noticed the "Doctor Who" tag on part 1 - I thought it was just a mistake...

My favourite part was drunk England crying "My Oxfords!" as he's beign carried by America about to escape the Savoy. That's actually one of my favourite England moments in any fanifc ever now.

otoshigo September 3 2012, 10:53:54 UTC

XD England's been strangely fixated on his shoes. Hopefully he's still wearing his Doc Martens because those are expensive.

ren_chan146 September 6 2012, 12:33:24 UTC

Oh my god, that was even more awesome that the last chapter and that means something. I laughed so much, those two are epic. XD
By the way, did they really break into the Savoy? I wouldn't be surprised if the people there actually know England and let them in despite his clothes.^^ But really, how could he do all that in just 15 minutes? I mean I guess he already had the holes for the piercings but what's with the hair?
Anyway, can't wait for the next part.^^

loreleissong September 6 2012, 23:21:17 UTC

I loved the image of America crawling along the ledges of the hotel with hungover punk England over his shoulder and the British Boot Company tote slung over his head like England's neck was a coat hook. I was snickering the whole time.

I also like how America curses and how it keeps changing. Does America think if you add a president's or general's name that it's not really cursing? 'Cuz I don't think it works that way Meri. He's so cute.

I like a lot of your descriptions of things, but there was one line that got me this chapter. Seriously,best line: "They went in, fitting into the old Georgian house like foofy miniature poodles wandering into a scifi movie scene."So now, as I'm reading on in the story, in the back of my mind, I'm still fixating on what kind of Scifi set that poodles would seem the most incongruous. And then you had to go and add Captain Jack into the mix. So now, I'm thinking Captain Jack, Daleks, Doctor Who (pick your favorite-9th for me), a companion or two and little fluffy white (or black) poodles and ( ... )