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Expendable (4/8)

Aug 28, 2012 22:35

Title: Expendable (4/8)
Warnings: Nothing too terrible
Word Count: 4633
Summary: England enacts his plan
A/N: ...Yeah, this is a fic continuation of Expendable. There are soooo many reasons why it's not being continued in comic form.
( In which I moan about life )

canada, amnesia, wales, fanfic, london

Comments 15

vemela August 30 2012, 07:45:55 UTC

Everytime you update, I do a happy dance. Seriously.

I'm really sorry about all of the dilemmas that you've faced! I hope that your hand feels better soon ;; Your efforts were well spent though. This was such an awesome update to this comic/series/thingy (?). You're actually a really good writer and portray both characters flawlessly. I love how you showed the extremes of their relationship and proved just how complicated it really is; for example, England being calm one minute and wanting to kill America the next (which is hilariously accurate).

The ending was just wow. You have us hanging! I can't wait until you get the chance to update again ;3;

Also, your knowledge of London after your trip is fantastic! You know more than I do about London and I've been there countless times so bravo to you there, too XDD

But yeah. This was fantastic. Your writing is superb, for lack of a better word to describe it!

otoshigo August 31 2012, 13:57:26 UTC

Gosh, thank you very much! :D I'm very happy to hear that! Characterization is such a tricky thing sometimes, but I always think it's one of the most important parts of a story. ^__^

Haha, yeah, when I go to a city I have every intention of owning it. XD I memorized guidebooks and maps, then went on a ton of guided walking tours in between exploring on my own. I even helped other people find their way around from memory. I even met the Queen. Admittedly, not in London. She came to our school in Virginia on the way to the Kentucky Derby.

theif_raccoon August 31 2012, 19:43:44 UTC

1. Make sure you use Hydroxide for those wounds on the hand. Yes it'll sting, but it'll get down deep enough so you won't have a infection. Make sure you wrap the bandage well on your hand.
2. Your mom owes you a PS2. They can be at your place, but they need to follow your rules. I know they are your parents, but they can't do that. My parents had to learn the hard way too. Once was enough to know that they destroy several hours of work that I won't get back. If you calmly explain that their actions as positive as it seems, it wasn't.
3. MOST IMPORTANT PART!! Rest. We rather know you healed up.

otoshigo September 2 2012, 18:31:27 UTC

Thanks for the advice. ^__^ And yes, we sorted the PS2 issue out. She went and got it back for me, thank bejeezus.

ren_chan146 September 2 2012, 11:39:05 UTC

First, I'm really sorry about what happened to you. I hope things will work again soon.
Second, this is an awesome continuation and I love your style. Had lots of fun reading it but I'm curious about what happens next.^^
By the way, are you going to draw this when everything works again?

otoshigo September 2 2012, 18:34:16 UTC

Aww, thanks. Yeah, it was just a ton of stuff happening at once. ^^; And awesome! Glad you liked it. ^__^

I may or may not. I think it depends on whether or not I think I can get all the details right. And how long this turns out to be. ^^;

badficwriter September 4 2012, 20:12:37 UTC

Since you got the old computer back, will the pictures ever come back? :(

I save a lot of the pictures I see to my own hard drive. Would you like me to gather yours up and send them to you in a file or something? (I've been going through your archive from the beginning the last few weeks.)