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Pomp and Circumstances, chapter 2: Department Meeting

Jul 03, 2008 23:24

Pomp and Circumstances

Chapter Two-Department MeetingJack pushed open the door and waved Ennis inside. The Cellar was a dingy, dimly lit place with only a few patrons sitting at the bar or hunched over corner tables at 3:30 on a Tuesday afternoon. Jack nodded at the bartender, who seemed to know exactly what was called for and handed over two ( Read more... )

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sienata July 4 2008, 03:55:43 UTC

YUCKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GROSSSSSSSSSS!!!! ickickickickick!! Randall and Alma TOTALLY squick me. Lureen is scary and so is Anita. Where was Jack and what did he have to do last night. Ennis is so cute and confused and I love Jack writing him notes during the ONE minute of meeting that he managed to catch. I'm really enjoying this story. You have got the details down perfectly. Can't wait to see what happens next. S!

shieldmaid1 July 10 2008, 01:01:29 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :) Randall and Alma and Lureen are based directly on people I currently work with. Glad I can put those annoying dept. meetings to a good use now! Thanks for reading--and I hope to have the new chapter up soon.

Pomp And Circumstances Chapter 2 bmshirts July 4 2008, 04:11:59 UTC

Well, it was getting funny until you threw sleaze Randall into the mix! And mousy Alma too? Jeez!!! I think Ennis needs to loosen up around Jack. It's obvious he hurt Jack's feelings in the bar parking lot. It would be best if they could stick together against the forces from The Dark Side!!
Thanks. Carole

Re: Pomp And Circumstances Chapter 2 shieldmaid1 July 10 2008, 01:02:16 UTC

Yes, it was a rather motley crew this time around--just getting you introduced to all the major players. New update soon--stay tuned! And thanks for reading. :)

nosunlight July 4 2008, 04:45:39 UTC

Looking forward for more.

shieldmaid1 July 10 2008, 01:02:35 UTC

Thanks! I'm working on it. (and looking forward to your next update too). :)

tizi17 July 4 2008, 06:31:39 UTC

do i love this? yess...
i really am into your story already.. thank you for writing it!

shieldmaid1 July 10 2008, 01:02:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. This one is really fun to write--more soon.

eandj July 4 2008, 07:29:54 UTC

Looove how you've written Randall and Alma.
Esp. with Randall I see funny and tough times coming
bring it on
Paula

shieldmaid1 July 10 2008, 01:03:12 UTC

Glad you like it! I'll be posting a new chapter before Saturday. :)