Good Neighbors--my lovefest entry

[shieldmaid1]

E switched off the overhead light in the kitchen, snapped off the two lamps that flanked the couch in the living room, and cursed under his breath when he tripped over the book he’d left lying open and face-down next to the recliner. Finally it was full dark, no illumination in here at all except for the occasional glint of moonlight off the glass

Comments

[tatia85]

... my system is SO unsure... my poor, little brain is in this here situation:

Rolling on the Floorr for Laugh!<--->Hot! Very Hot! Yummy!

Now, you can't do such a thing to a poor reader! :P
lol! (laugh wins for now!) so they watched each other? Jack putting his little show for Ennis? *laughing hard*

And how hot is Ennis peaking with the binocular at Jack? (Hot wins now) I would do pretty much the same with Jack as neighbourn! XD

Please more of this! XD Want to know what happens next XD I can just GUESS how uncomfortable Ennis will be...
*lolling* XD

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks so much for reading! I apologize for the long delay in replying; RL just wouldn't leave me alone. But I'm planning an update to this . . . and a few other things. Glad you liked it. :)

[smiles_a_lot]

OMG OMG OMG. Jen! You pervert! That was so incredibly hot, the ice cube and the peeping and finally the pizza! Me likee, me likee a lot. Plus the two flashbacks. Sigh. I am one seriously flushed and happy girl. It was like Rear Window meets American Pie. lol. YOU SO GOOD. Thanks for sharing. xx Em

[shieldmaid1]

OK, Em, you are the only person whose comment ever made me laugh out loud. :) Yes--Rear Window + American Pie was exactly my intention!! Glad you liked it. Hopefully now I am over the RL mountain and can get back to my real work: writing happy slash. xx Jen

[tmn1966]

Oh, Hot Guy and E, can't they be my neighbors?! Voyeurism and masturbation. Very descriptive and very hot. I liked this a lot.

Thanks so much for sharing this.

Teri

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks for reading! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[fridayblues]

Thud, this is so sensual and sexy. Ah! The idea of a peeping-tom is so refreshing and Ennis has it bad, bad, bad. LOL
Oh, I can use the next chapter really!
Thanks, this is a lot of fun :)
xxx

[shieldmaid1]

Wow, I'm honored to get a comment from you (I love everything you write). :) I'm really glad you liked it. RL has gotten in my way quite a bit lately, but I'm back at work (on slash) again and have three different things in the works . . . stay tuned! Thanks for reading.

[jacks_key]

Dayyyyyyyyyyum, that was incredibly, monumentally HOTT! Wow, I can hardly breathe...images of Jack touching himself - guh! *DED*

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks! That's quite an honor, coming from someone who writes hotness so well. :) Glad you liked it.