Going Down, Chapter Eleven: Burned Down

[shieldmaid1]

Pairing: Ennis/Jack

Comments

[aliceathome]

Hi - I'm just lining up your entire story to date to read tomorrow - promise I'll leave comments! I've friended you if that's OK!

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks for friending me! I look forward to reading your comments and hope you enjoy the story. :)

[shieldmaid1]

Hee hee . . . I always knew he was up to no good. Just wanted Jack to get a little reward for finally punching the guy out. Thanks for reading! :)

[katetwist]

Well I thoroughly enjoyed that bedtime story - I always look forward to Going Down updating.

What a relief Randall was carted off and I can't wait for Jack to get back to Ennis where he belongs. Please update soon!

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks so much for reading. Yes, J & E are equally anxious to reunite . . .

[midget_size]

Eww Randall! What a snake. Prison is a good place for a guy like him. Can't wait until Jack and Ennis are back together and we get to observe the "more where that came from!"

[shieldmaid1]

Yes, I wanted to show that Randall is untrustworthy in multiple ways. Now Jack has an even better picture of Ennis in contrast to Randall. Thanks for reading!

[gamma_ray00]

AAWWW thanks for this wonderful addition to your story. I could not keep a smile off my face during the phone sex..it was so sweet with Jack carefully guiding Ennis...very different from any phone sex I have read in any other fic...very refreshing..kudos to you for making it new for us.
Yay...Randall is gone...at least for now....I just felt dirty when he was trying to get his hands on Jack...ICK!!
I know it is going to be uber tender when Jack and Ennis get together...hugs to you for a great story..

[shieldmaid1]

I'm glad you liked the phone/radio scene. :) I had fun writing it! Thanks for reading.