...*[fic] Doll*...

[shi_chan06]

Fandom: Naruto
Pairing/Characters: Umino Iruka
Rating: R - for themes/language
Summary: Iruka on a mission where he is sold and trained to cater to high class customers -- this is his first service. And it's a reminder of what shame a shinobi is forced to bear.
Notes: Initially written as a writing sample for the RP game Guys & Dolls. I was

Comments

[kennardaillard]

So hard but so beautifully written. It makes you wonder if that is what a shinobi like Iruka, not very used to doing field work, has to endure, what will high ranking ninjas like Kakashi have to do in a regular basis?
Wonderful fanfic.

[shi_chan06]

Yes on all accounts. I do not believe for a moment that even a sweet-heart like Iruka would be innocent even if he is still (seemingly) the most stable of the lot.

I'm trying to figure out if I want to expand on this vein of the storyline or not. It was quite fun writing this! I'm glad you enjoyed the short read :)

[illereyn]

I like the POV and how you write Iruka's feelings (or desperately trying to suppressed is emotions). The parentheses worked really well to reflect his inner conflict.

[shi_chan06]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed that! :)

[monypatos]

have to be very professional to survive an encounter of this magnitude do not think that Iruka is an object to look rather think that some old pervert trying to get their hands on.
I guess you have something more in the pipeline for this material gives a great fic congratulate her on her ecena start of something no one plays in his fiction and it feels like a shinobi on a mission of sexual object, there will kakashi gone through something similar ?

[shi_chan06]

I agree, one has to have a certain state of mind to be a shinobi or at least bear the consequences of it as a human being. :)

Anyway, I have been thinking of turning this into a story and bringing Kakashi into the whole thing as well. Perhaps with a different story line and treat this piece as a prequel. So we'll see. It's a fresh idea and I'm looking into working it into something more cohesive. Or at least readable! >8D

I'm glad you read it though! And hopefully liked it too :)

[joyfulljunebugg]

YES PLEASE DO THIS!!! bring Kakashi in and make KakaIru =) Do you have an (A03) Archive of Our Own account?

[nemurustar]

You have no idea how much I miss you fanfics!! Ahh angst!! nicely done!

[shi_chan06]

Awww sweety! <3

I miss writing fanfics too! Yosh! I will try to entertain you some.... hopefully!

[left_speechless]

I really liked this. I had similar thoughts about the whole "being a shinobi" thing so I enjoyed this even more. I just love the way you picked your scene. It's not easy to narrow something down and despite that get your point across.