Ficlet: Sneaky Kisses - Bait and Switch (NCIS McGee/DiNozzo)

[shetiger]

Title: Sneaky Kisses - Bait and Switch
Author: tigerlady
Fandom: NCIS
Pairing: McGee/DiNozzo
Rating: Not porny
Spoilers: None

Notes: Thanks to frater_x for the idea. I couldn't sneak the voyeurism in, but I'll write you some hot Ziva/Abby action at some point, I promise.

Comments

[shetiger]

Thank you!

[adnamamai]

Oh yes!

[shetiger]

Thanks!

[redvelvetribbon]

I love what you did with the smells and the tastes of the closet. Too many writers forget about that. The soap, the musty smell, the mop, the cleanening products, amazing visuals. They're both coming out of the closet. Really fun.

[shetiger]

Thank you so much!

[iamscullysmile]

oh i agree. meant to mention that in my comment...the smells and tastes were great details, as was the nice symbolism of them being in a CLOSET, lol!

[dodificus]

The funny thing about this is that I have a couple of stories open on my computer and when I started reading this I was thoroughly confused because I thought I was reading *another* story I was halfway through. I'm silly;)

Enjoyed this very much even though it wasn't a crazy space AU:)

[shetiger]

Hee! Thank you!

(And my apologies for the late reply--just pretend it got lost in space somewhere in an alternative universe. *g* )

[iamscullysmile]

oooh...lots of naughty fun! *wiggles eyebrows* tell me youre gonna write a follow up that continues back at tony's place? please? *weg*

[shetiger]

Hee! I hadn't thought about a follow up, but I might write one at some point. Just not anytime soon. (Christmas ficathons are breathing down my neck, oh my!)

Thanks!